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LunaJack


I am over 50, married, and have a pre-teen daughter. I love Disney, MLP, the Beatles "Yellow Submarine", and Harry Potter. I think Alan Rickman was the sexiest actor ever!

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This story is a sequel to The Chaotic Three: A Zany Story


Cinnamon Roll, the adopted daughter of Applejack and Spike, is elated! Her Very Special Some-Griffon, Gulliand, has popped the question... and asked for her help to fulfill his dream of establishing a restaurant in Griffonstone! With a grant from the Royal Sisters, they work to make Gulliand's dream come true. Despite objections from both families, two disgruntled Griffon scone bakers, and a growing mountain of debt the two manage to persevere. But when Gulliand is forced to choose between Cinnamon Roll and his dream...will it all come crashing down? Or will true love prevail?

This is a sequel/side story to "The Chaotic Three: a Zany Story" which is set in Disneyfanatic's "Daughter of Discord" universe. Cinnamon Roll, Cinnamon Stick, Applespike, Zany, Jewel, and Twinkle all belong to DF. Gulliand the Griffon is my own creation.

Sex is for mild innuendo and deep kissing.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 51 )

I'm so excited i think my head is gonna explode again (BOOM!) oops oh well i'm a ghost it'll grow back.

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Like a Loony Toons character.:rainbowlaugh:

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More like spongebob on his best day ever. it's the best day ever (best day ever)

Love it!!!! Keep writing more also i think you should do something like cherry is sad when she finds out about cinnamon roll and her dating because in CMCTNG cherry is said to like gemstone but gemstone likes prism BUT prism and kicks like each other and cinnamon roll helps cherry feel better and they dance together and it seems like cherry likes cinnamon so that might be and idea

I might be addictive to the flight story


Prism x kicks for life

Not flight story CMCTNG

I hate auto correct


Love your DOD fanfic personally you and Disney Fantic are my favorite mlp writers your story give a interesting story line while developing the characters emotions and emotions for others but not including chunky writing or making it to cheesy but still have lots of sweet moments but have emotional set backs of problems that they need to solve while dealing with their emotional problems or even connect the two please keep writing knowing you made a new dod story and getting to read it really makes my day i hope you enjoy writing your story as much as I love reading them

I ship kicks and prism

Keep writing

Of you need places to find good information about the dod world
read
bride of discord
Daughter of discord
CMCTNG
Drabbles of discord
Son in law of discord
Hearts warming chaos
I love ya to the core
the Discord dating game


These are all good sources and all written by Disney fantic in the dod universe and I hope it you haven't read them yet will give you inspiration


I ship prism and kicks

Kickim out of the park

Keep writing

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Thanks for the feedback and the praise! I really needed to hear it. I have read those other DoD Universe stories, I just didn't start reading CMCTNG until after I had started writing Chaotic Three. I am definitely taking Cherry into account in this fic. Thanks a lot!:twilightsmile:

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Glad to be of service
I didn't know how many you've read

I ship prism and kicks

Keep writing

Is you leaving Rainbow and her potential family deliberate, like we'll see them later? Or is it just a choice you made? Not concerned; just curious.

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No. They will definitely be in the story. I will be introducing Rainbow's new foal. And you can bet Rainbow Dash is going to share her opinion on Cinnamon's proposed wedding.

There'll be more soon, right? I love Cinnamon Roll!

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Yes, there will be more. I'm sorry for the delay on this chapter, I had some serious writer's block. But, now I know what I want to do, it should be smoother sailing.:twilightsmile:

I really liked this chapter, can't wait to read more.

Love this chapter it gives more insight on cinnamon roll background and keep making more awesome chapters

Love you stories keep doing more amazing ones 😊:ajsmug:

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Thank you! And I will! :twilightsmile:

EEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so proud of the little Cinnamon Bun. *gasps* She should meet my character, ''Tennis Ball'' The first daughter of Screwball and Mothball, Link in the description!!! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/423410/grandaughters-of-discord

Alright I have to say this is great we got more zinkle and now we just need to wait for the next chapter all in all its a great chapter hope to see more soon.:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for the feedback!:twilightsmile:

Omg i cant believe you have another chapter out and i agree with you phantom ghost also love the ship name zinkle any way keep up the good work luna jack!!!!

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Thanks! I wanted Twinkle and Zany to make an appearance. I hope this was good.

Applespike looked at his sister strangely. “What’s wrong with you? You used to be able to put away a lot more than that AND still be able to buck half the orchard.”
“I know.” The little brown filly looked down at her body. She noticed the slight softening of the muscles in her legs and lowered her head in shame. “I ain’t workin’ like I used to…and it shows,” she muttered.

Oh I know the reason....
Someone is cooking a little bun in the oven...

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Well, I really meant that she wasn't working on the farm as much so she's kinda lost her strength. As for "bun in the oven", well, stay tuned!

Isn't Screwball pregnant. Just wondering.

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Yes, she was, But the events in My Big Fat Griffon Wedding take place a year after the events in The Chaotic Three, so Screwball has given birth.:twilightsmile:

Oh boy. Here comes the shocks and gasp. Take cover!

Huh. Even if the episode where she goes to Griffonstone isn't canon, I'd never thought Rainbow would be such a massive specist.

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Since this is a different universe, I assumed that Rainbow and Gilda never reconciled and resentment built up. She is also worried about Cinnamon going to a foreign country where she will be the minority.

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Thank you. You are too kind!:twilightsmile:

Well gulliand mother hasn’t insulted the Apple family yet soo I will have to wait until I can decide weither I hate her or not, but his sisters I’m starting to like. Also glad to see you are ok with this virus going around.

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So far, so good. Thanks for asking. Hope you are doing okay.

Amazing Job! I hope your doing well during this time. This chapter has totally help me during the moment. 💗

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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm doing well.

I'm liking this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Aww this was a cute chapter. I really hope nothing bad happens to their relationship. I can’t wait for the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

Thank you. I'm going to try to get it out as soon as I can:twilightsmile:

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm sooo exited can;t wait for the next chapter

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I'm working on it. Thank you!:twilightsmile:

Aww poor Applespike, I know what’s it like to have your sibling move away. It’s hard but you get through it with your friends and family there. Wonder what Uncle George did to make Gulliand to shout No! Amazing chapter once again! So excited for the next one! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the praise. I was a little worried the chapter was too rushed. I have to admit the scene with Applespike was inspired by my uncle. He broke down and cried when my Mom went off to college.

HELLL YEAH ITS BACK BABY!!! I'm sooo glad i decided to check my libray for this story. Keep up the good work!

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