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Everypony in the land of Equestria has a purpose; Violet Rose was told that many times, but she didn’t entirely believe it when it came to her. She usually spent her time by herself, but when a deranged pirate named Jackpot Spade invades Ponyville and threatens to destroy Equestria if Violet doesn’t give herself to him, she’ll have to team up with a group of ponies AND different creatures to save Equestria by LEAVING it.
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.... you have no idea
Isn't it though
And as usual, everypony is completely incapable of doing anything with a magical macguffin
Unless Adante is to Sirens what Celestia is to ponies, i can't see her being anywhere near powerful enough to accomplish any of this (especially not weakening Discord's magic when he wasn't even there)
We need an explanation to Adante being so much more powerful than the Dazzlings (remember that they were defeated by the Pillars)
... what about inside Equestria, you know, the two mares that move the sun and moon around, have an army and knows a great deal of things, and could probably deal with Adante ?
... really
You are going to need to explain Adante somewhere along the line, because you are making her up to be far too powerful with no explanation of how she is so powerful (remember there have been Sirens before and they were not this powerful)
Other than that good Job, i like it so far
Which makes next to no sense
Adante makes no sense, also you Captain Jack Sparrow wannabe, she didn't "help" you take control, she did all the work and she is still the only reason you're in control 
(sorry about me whining so much about this) 
Explain. Her. Being. This. Powerful. PLEASE
You guys do realize that Ponyville is visable from Canterlot right
You're doing all the work though
She is too powerful to be scared of him.
Sorry again if i whine a bit much, but this plan relies so heavily on Andante being able to somehow keep Celestia and Luna, as well at what they have at their disposal as rulers of a nation, from coming in, defeating her and freeing everyone captured, that i can't really like that part of the story.
The rest i like and find interesting don't get me wrong, but i ended up focusing a lot on Andante and how the plan relies so much on no one noticing that something bad happened in Ponyville and then coming in and putting a stop to it all
You counted
How ?
And yes Andante did it i know, but they are miles away from her and it didn't seem like she took anything from them like Tirek (or Starlight) did, so how does what Andante did work and how is it still affecting them (especially Discord, who wasn't even there) ?
I think i see where this is going
Wait what, they didn't give the reason for their actions... then i have to doubt if they were really guards.
And Snow never tried to find out why these "guards" grabbed him ?
Just the house ?
Why didn't she check outside or look all over town, and those three even said that they were there for the filly and if she's gone after you get knockad out it should be obvious that those three took her.
You counted
*Looks at Discord accusingly*
He invaded their home and took over the town through magical coercion, no matter his reason, that is mean
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Jackpot Spade is supposed to be modeled after Captain Jack Sparrow and Spade's fiery temper is something every pony and every creature is afraid of. No one wants to get on his bad side, no matter how powerful they are
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Also I have another profile. Feel free to check it out: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10867726/VioletRose13
Who invades a town through hostile means and keep the residents prisoners with the threat of violence
Will we ever get an explanation as to why Andante is so powerful? Also, how come you haven't addressed any of Asolem2's concerns?
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You'll see why Andante is as powerful as she is soon enough. Just be patient
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Thank you
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You're welcome
Aaaand he's doomed
... You were working for a guy called Torment, what did you think you were getting yourself into
Also thank you for the explenations, they made sense (as much sense as anything in a magical land filled with pastel colored ponies and mythological creatures can)
Now there is just the questions around the Blue Flower power that needs answer, we have its origin but now we need to know what it actually does... let's see what you come up with
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I'm just glad you're being patient with me
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Always
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Well, Jackpot Spade didn't ask any questions about what Torment's plans were. And he didn't think that all of this was what Torment wanted all along.
This is hilarious... and i wish i could hear this voiced
... are we sure Pinkie is still in her cage
It's a Trojan Cake, of course it will work, it always does... Tempest would know
Trojan Cake, no one ever sees it coming :coolphoto
........... I will be honest, did not see that one coming
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What can I say? This story has lots of surprises
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Gotta agree with this. Sirens can't steal magic and shouldn't be able to steal Discord's magic, given how powerful he is (Tirek had to take all the magic in Equestria except for the alicorns' before he could do that). This is basically a transparent way to nerf characters who should have been able to defeat this particular gang of baddies without trouble. Also, with his body shape, I don't think Discord would survive a trek through miles of snow and ice without any kind of winter gear or his powers. He's going to lose a lot of heat through his tail because scales have no cold protection and he's too skinny to hold much heat. He's furry, so he's better prepared than a human with no gear, but that's not saying much.
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You realize you live in a world where things like love and friendship is literally a "I/We Win" right ?
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Don't forget, she's still a dragon and she's trying to act tough
P.S. Spoiler alert: there's only one chapter left
This was a nice story... maybe a few to many scenes that were near copies of scenes from the movie, but other than that it was nice
I hope there's a complete soundtrack of the songs used in this story.