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VioletRose13


Just another ordinary Pegasister looking to share her stories with others.

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One-shot. Rumble feels incredibly guilty about what he did to the Cutie Mark Crusaders and their Day Camp. After a long while, he finally works up the courage to apologize to the girls for his actions.

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I wouldn’t call myself a forgiving person, but this is probably the rare time I would accept the apology.

What's the random for and why did you put Discord in this story?

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I wanted Discord to help out in some way

Fluttershy will be giving Discord a lecture about threatening foals. Still it's good that Rumble apologized.

This was a neat read; always wondered what the CMC's must have thought afterwards about Rumble's actions. Nice to see Discord making an appearance in the story and setting Rumble straight about what he did wrong. Good job!:scootangel:

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this one-shot up. The dialogue and general wrap-up were certainly good. I definitely liked the little nod to your VioletVerse series in Rumble's chat with Discord (Discord making good points about forgiveness was really appreciated).

Another VioletVerse short story could be set about three years after that battle with Tirek, Chrysalis and Cozy having slightly older and wiser versions of the Crusaders keeping Discord company to keep him from getting too bored with Fluttershy - otherwise occupied - as well as finding out about a certain somebody that Discord really cared for more than a thousand years ago. (and I'll keep quiet about the rest because that would be too many spoilers).

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