Twilight Sparkle fights her most nefarious enemy yet: her kitchen door.
She loses... well, almost.
Mild (pony-ized) profanity warning.
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Discord would enchant a door with antimagic field for a prank
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This was the first thing I started thinking about as soon as I read the description.
I definitely feel Twilight would scream "Are you KIDDING ME?!"
instead of the ponified swears you have now. I also think she might be more upset that the incident could have put her off schedule than any anger at the door itself for not yielding to her magic. Perhaps she might check her to do list again as she was leaving to make sure she was still on track. 
Otherwise, I think you did a fantastic job with it!
So Twilight forgot how to teleport?
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She tried teleportation. She ended up still outside the door.
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Thanks for the feedback! Those are good suggestions; I might implement them.
Guessed the ending but amazing all the same.
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