• Published 2nd Aug 2012
  • 704 Views, 114 Comments

A Lightning Storm: Rebooted - The Mirage



As a Wonderbolt anything can happen, it can all be taken away just like that.

Comments ( 7 )

bravo, bravo, another great story completed in the best of ways. You sir, have a gift.

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Thank You :twilightblush:

But seriously, there are much better authors.

there may be, but yall are one of my favorites

I AM SUPER PUMPED FOR NO EXACT REASON!
YYYEEEAAAHHH! awesome story, by the way.

Where's the sequel, if there is one, btw amazing story. Liked how u use so much detail

I am sorry about my negative comments throughout this story. I felt like I should give some suggestions to make things a bit easier to follow for future readers. I really did enjoy this story quite a bit. I am now looking forward to reading your "Ascension". Keep up the great writing!

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