hmm whom else is thinking werewolf and also she got bit O.o0 by Trixie anyway that could have gone better also what reason was there to kiss her hmm freakin dumbass
I feel like you could have drawn out some emotional turmoil inside of Mirage's head before having her kiss Dash. I also feel like there could have been a bit more of a monologue by Trixie. Van Helsing comes to the rescue!
whoa. that was AWESOME!!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
I think I have an idea on who the pony who saved her might be.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
1129087 so do i lol, not me.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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hmm whom else is thinking werewolf and also she got bit O.o0 by Trixie anyway that could have gone better also what reason was there to kiss her hmm freakin dumbass
I feel like you could have drawn out some emotional turmoil inside of Mirage's head before having her kiss Dash. I also feel like there could have been a bit more of a monologue by Trixie. Van Helsing comes to the rescue!