• Member Since 6th Aug, 2013
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Daemon McRae

The magic comedy hoers.


Octavia and Vinyl couldn't be more different. Sure, they both like jazz(-ish), but that's about all they have in common. After one really bad first impression, can these two stand to be around each other long enough to recognize that they're not that different? And that they're both looking for the same thing?

Not if they have anything to say about it. Goodbye, security deposits.

(Added the [sex] tag for suggestive situations and stuff. Y'know, to be safe.)

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 136 )

Well its somebodies fault....the writers maybe?:trixieshiftright:

>>Aero Flow
It's only going to go downhill from here.

That's the best part.

Gooooodbyeeee security depost. :raritydespair: We hardly knew ye. :raritycry:

Well, you don't have to worry about any sharp words from me. I really enjoy your work! Octavia's troubles with anger management remaind me of... me. :derpyderp2:
And I think it is actually a good thing that you excluded the sex scenes. In this particular story they would just hinder the comedy and slow this down. :twilightsmile:

Conflicting chapter titles!

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!:flutterrage:

I'm at a complete loss as to pick which part of this chapter was the funniest. Great job!

I have a problem with this....

ITS TO FUCKIN AWESOME!!!!:rainbowkiss:

I nodded. “Alright, Vinyl. We can give it a try. I mean, what’s the worst that could happen?
I like to think the following events were not my fault.

You said the magic words. Ergo, it's your fault Spitfire. :trollestia:

Breaking the fourth wall for real now, aren't you? :pinkiehappy:

3092889 It's more like a conscious narrative. The whole story's been done so far from a perspective that makes it seem like the pony is actually telling someone all of this. I just decided to make it more obvious that what they're doing is retelling events at some point in the future instead of talking about the present.

Well...:twilightoops:...this is gonna go over like a rock concert in a nitroglycerin plant. But hey, explosions are pretty. :pinkiecrazy:

I like it. If you enjoy Vinyl/Octavia, might I recommend "University Days"? It's amazing.

This apartment won't know what hit it...

Oh man,I don't know if you're ready for this but...here we go...

(Takes deep breath)

I like. Is funny. Watch your pacing. Proofread just a little bit more. Faved and liked.



I think you meant "fainting". A feint is a false move used to trick an opponent in a combat situation.

This can only end well, right guys?


...Where are you?

...Please don't leave me here with...them...

...I'm so cold...

Is it going to turn poly? I hope so. That would be almost too win.

BEST. CHAPTER. EVER. (and the one with derpy)

HA.... Can't breath.... :rainbowlaugh: Keep up the great work!

yes.... I'm really digging this writing format.
the following narrative with the switched perspectives, it really works well with the story.
I look forward to reading more of this.
also: brought here by eyes wide shut, but I like Octy-Scratch so I'm checking this out too.

I knew it was going to go down the second I read 'the bigger pony'
poor choice of words Octy. very poor choice of words.

I'll admit it... I did not see that one coming.

I do agree with Corwin on this one. Sex scenes would ruin the pace of the comedy.
However... I'm not saying that it wouldn't be entertaining to read the hate sex scenes in a side story... just saying. :scootangel:

This seems like an alt universe of the Vinyl scratch tapes.
and I'm okay with that.

that ceiling just got as wrecked this chapter as the fourth wall. OOH! :yay:

in other news... roommate sitcom time?

Tankbuster McEatsgrenades

I almost died laughing. I just reread that line line six times.
also, why would Vinyl stay with Octy anyway? She was a marefriend to crash with.

I keep reading this.
and I keep enjoying it more.
Good to have Octy back in the story.
this can only end in disaster, completely uneventfully (which would be a real shocker truth be told), or in a threeway.
the two most likely options hold the most promise for me.

... no
I've been reading this nonstop for the past... what time is it now?
crap! for the last few hours and I get story jacked on a cliffhanger?!
where's the next chapter? I've been hitting the next chapter button for last few hours, so why has it stopped working?
I must know more about Octy's.... special.... idiosyncrasies. (yeah, lets go with that word)

And here I was thinking that Spits and Scratch didn't like Tavi.

Chocolate. Shirish Cream. Chocolate cookie dough mix. Chocolate fudge. And, for added flavor, chocolate pieces.

yeah and now there is drool on my keyboard... I don't know whether to go buy ice cream right away or to clean up this first... :derpyderp1:

It's called Dublin Mud Slide, or just Mud Slide, in real life. It's a Ben n Jerry's pint available at most any grocery store. Go buy some right now.

3251052 I don't really trust the shops of my country (central Europe is so undersupplied in some ways...) but the quest is so on! I'll mix it myself if need be! :rainbowdetermined2:

Huzzah, a new chapter has emerged.:flutterrage:

As much as I love all of your wittyness. I feel this was a little too fast.
One second Vinyl was having sex with the marefriend she apparrantly 'loved' and then the next she is started to initiate something with another mare that we have been lead to believe she didnt like. I know (or im guessing) that this has been your plan all along but it just felt like it happened to fast.

I still love the story but that is my two cents on it.


Oh, ye of little faith. Would I do something as horrible as rush the plot like that?

Maybe, but you'll have to find out later.

Brilliant maestro. I look forward to the next chapter.

Methinks that both Spitfire and Octavia should get the Vinyl. :pinkiesad2:

At the same time. :pinkiecrazy:

In bed. :pinkiehappy:

Well, that pops the cork on one plot development. (So many jokes.) Yes, I’d actually been planning on this, well, as much planning as actually goes into this story. By which I mean, I sat down for like a minute a few days ago and said “Hate sex. I’m totally making that a thing.” Then I had some more alcohol. Then I sobered up, and it was STILL a great idea.

Oh don’t worry. This is still far from over. Don’t think I’ve forgotten about the property damage.

that sir and or lady-sir... HEE! sorry, listining to pony dubstep makes me bubbly:derpytongue2: most of the best ideas came from innebriation( but i usually stick to citric acid, lime, bubble water, and of course, lots of alcohol making sugar[can not remember what it is called])
anyways, funny stuff, but, i also have lyra breathing down my neck to hurry up...(lyra: hello! get on wth the... does the microphone really have to be tunned to that frequency?) sorry...(sonic multi-tool buzzing) better? (much)

“Hey, bowties are cool!”
yes, so are cardigans and scarves, and bomber jackets... and other stuff

ideas? why not throw in some of this to quadruple the awesome::derpytongue2:
that is what all things need, a bit of this::derpyderp1:
and a sprinke of this::derpyderp2:

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