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Olakaan Peliik
"There’s a thin line between being a hero and being a memory." - Optimus Prime
Olakaan Peliik
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You've got me hooked, let's see where you go with it
Good start, can you keep the momentum going?
Keeping up the energy, I do hope you keep it up. Though I also hope you squeeze in some good political story telling as well, mafia has always been interesting to me.
Wish you spent a little more time on the discussions, but so far the pacing is good. Considering most of these things are happening just about the same time as each other it reads well. You've earned my like and I'll be keeping an eye on this story as it progresses.
Are you going to continue this story?