"There’s a thin line between being a hero and being a memory." - Optimus Prime
An exploration adventure, just to kinda see what was over the horizon. Just like any other, right? WRONG!
Of course I get far more than I asked for. What kind of story would it make if I just kept telling everypony and dragon that I found this place and that place? No, something just had to go askew and make everything more complicated. Why can't these things ever go smoothly?
Parent Story: Flames.
Edited by PonyJosiah13
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OHH YESSSS!! YEEEEEEESSSSSS!
Loved the bits of stuff you put in from the movie!
Also:
HE’S BACK! if only for a quick cameo
OHHHH THIS IS GONNA BE SO FUN!!!!
Hmm, I like Stranger In A Strange Land scenarios like this, whether there's romance or not. I will enjoy this, methinks.
Ah lurve....
Ah, mawwaige, dat dweam wiffin a dweam...
Enjoy? I did.
Hmm, whether to try integration into Viper or main dragon society or reach some sort of medium, whether Nandak needs to literally fight for his mate, more on Klo's personality, how Big Brother Ambassador is going to react to Nandak's injury, Nandak's recovery from nearly losiing a wing... Dangit, want more now. :(
Nice short story, well executed. Could have used more time with the Viper Dragons, but can see why you glossed over them to keep the story flowing. 7/10, would read again.
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Thanks! And I'm not done with these two, just so you know. They just gotta make their appearances in Flames for a bit.
Yes, please make the sequel, I love this story!
What a nice chapter. Reminds me of home back south in Arkansas. Such nice people.