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So once I had an idea...

Who am I kidding? Directly inspired by Dark Secrets by SwiftShad0wWing1.

I've taken a slightly different approach than he, I believe. In mine, can Rainbow figure out exactly what's going on? Can she protect her friends- and, possibly more importantly, when/how does she plan to reveal her identity to them, if ever?

("Can she protect her friends" is a typical duh question. The other isn't.)

Tags may be updated as the story progresses.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 39 )

Another one! I thought it had been a while since an update and had started to suspect.

I'm rather curious what that device is supposed to be. What on earth does it need a laser as a trigger for?
And for that matter, it sounds like a fancy magic 8-ball right now. Is that truly it, or does it also have some sort of locked cache that she wants to open and needs the right information for?

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Sorry about the update thing, I’ve been putting a lot of effort lately into vehicle maintenance, work, and a little bit of a journey... I’ve had a hectic week. But I’m back to normal now, so :pinkiehappy:

A few grammar errors here and there, but it's interesting overall so far.

So Rainbow Dash _is_ the pie destroyer. :pinkiegasp:

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Uh.... *watches clip* Um....

Not really. But she could do that, if she wanted.

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Well, I was kidding, but that's what immediately came to mind when I saw "dark magic Rainbow Dash." :scootangel:

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I figured XD seems a bit crazy, if you ask me... but that was pinkie. She seems to get worked up to ridiculous over everything. In the show.
I don't portray her that way.

spellwork effecting him

affecting

This is getting convoluted...
There are more than one of them!

I wonder who tagged the guard, or why...

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Yes, there are more than one of them. For this story, I've devised an entire system for dark magic... this is one of the results.

I like this so far.

Do all of your stories take elements from other stories?

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Not all of them... I mean, Prime Delivery was pretty unique. But yeah, most of them share a common headcanon at the very least. This one's based on an abandoned story by another author as well, but it still uses my normal headcanon.

... it is the only one to really have much detail on the dark magic side of things, though. I developed a lot of my headcanon on that end with this story, and I like some of the implications, so you can bet I'll use it again sometime, somewhere.

She shakes her head. “They know who I pretend to be, my facade, sure. But they don’t know that I actually amSombra’s daughter.”

Silence scatters through the room. A quill falling on a piece of parchment would be loud.

She nods. “Yeah. Strongest shadowcaster in the world for over a thousand years.” She sighs. “Not that hard to immortalize one’s self with that much power.” She glances up at Cadence. “I still can’t figure out how I ended up so strong when Sombra wasn’t a shadowcaster at all- everything he did was dark magic- and his wife, my mom, was a weak shadowcaster.”

“But-! But-!” Twilight begins.

Anyone else find how casual RD stated that she's Sombra's Daughter funny?
Shadow magic wouldn't kill THIS guy (he's my OC).

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Looking back at it, yeah, I do. She's, like, way calm for the situation.

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I do hope there's Luna's and Celestia's jaws drop when they find out. Don't you agree with me on Shadow Magic most likely wouldn't kill my OC?

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It depends- I'm putting the shadow magic as extremely effective in combat... yet it's already been noted that any shadow magic- including combat stuff- is useless against Rainbow. So obviously, there is a variance to ponies' resistance to it, just most of 'em are pretty low.

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Let me guess you missed the part about how darkness/shadow attacks effects him?

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*reads that last part* Huh, yeah... I don't know- my idea of the shadowmagic isn't necessarily dark. And I've already laid the groundwork for at least some level of immunity, so he's your OC- and you can have him interact with my shadowmagic however you please.

Comment posted by Edguy0009 deleted Apr 15th, 2019

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ANYTHING that ISN'T light based will give him a power boost so dark, shadow it DOESN'T MATTER BOTH will be beneficial to him.

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True, I must have missed that somewhere- and the reason shadow magic corrupts when cast through a light magic spell is because of its more sinister nature, the same nature that is neutralized by a direct cast...

So yeah. He'd be unharmed.

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Yeah so if ever tells someone who using dark/shadow based powers to hit him with whatever they got they should do it, on that note he and RD would make a great team.

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Power-wise at least, oh yeah.

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And maybe even give each other a few pointers.

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...And maybe troll others with their powers.

Or her father’s secrets. It’s always possible he wasn’t hiding something about her youth behind that door.

OR......it hides an access hatch to a structure to a LONG....... dead race (only those who know who Nfire is will get the reference).

Trolling is fun. Especially if it's true.

Am I missing something? She just dropped all that right in front of her friends and Cadance and didn't get blasted. Isn't that sudden?

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And Cadence didn't get blasted...?

I fail to catch your meaning.

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Suddenly using what everyone thinks is dark magic and dropping that you are in contact with a secret group of said magic users normally results in a a check to make sure your brains have not leaked out your ears. Especially if you use it to assault Twilight, even if she refuses to look up from her scroll.

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It felt like there should have been another chapter, or that she had already mentioned something about this group to her friends or hinted at something more going on. It was otherwise pretty good so far.

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She did :pinkiehappy: Remember, she tried to tell them about it the day before... but Twilight wouldn't listen.

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My OC has gained a new and more powerful form.

Wow. I loved reading this story. It’s a shame I won’t know how it ends.

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