Sunset Shimmer is dead. Rainbow Dash is stubborn. Luna is a sucker for puppy dog eyes. For these three reasons, Sunset gets a second shot at being not dead. All Rainbow has to do is guide her marefriend out of hell. What could go wrong?
Written for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Journeys.
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That ending was confusing (even though also entertaining). And it was a bit odd to not see the actual part where Hades!Luna makes the deal with Dash: I would have thought that could be a fun scene to show.
But you still get a thumbs up because it felt like Sunset and Rainbow were both very much in character, and their romantic banter felt convincing (even though I'd've liked to see more of it).
Congrats on an unusual innovative approach to the contest prompt!
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Thanks for the feedback and for the thumbs up!
And if course he had everything to do with the story@
That bit about the apple didn't work, but the rest of this was hilarious. :D
It’s okay Dash, at least it isn’t patterned off the Japanese version where Sunset becomes a death god bent on your destruction.