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Nightmare Night approaches and the most popular event of Cloudsdale has arrived: the festival. More specifically, the costume contest.

Written for the Flutter Dash group’s Nightmare Night contest.

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Not bad. I enjoyed it. But the ending felt like it could have been showing us and not simply telling us what they did next. Their getting together and fluttershy finding enjoyment is a big payoff that we don’t get to be right there experiencing. While he while memories way to end it was sweet, i feel like the longer more in depth option would have been more fun for me to read.

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Lol I don’t like candy corn either, but 10 pounds of any kind of candy can get you far in elementary school.:raritywink:

And presenting the project, the cherry on top of the group project sundae.

This is me right here

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