Rainbow Dash lost finally lost a race, and is now being interrogated by Twilight to find out why she did what she did.
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This was... Weird? Strange? Awkward? Yeah, awkward is the word. There is quite a bit of this story that stays in line with the characters, but a large portion of it didn't. It's certainly an interesting idea, but the premise behind it isn't strong enough to warrant it. As for grammar, there were some noobish mistakes strewn throughout, but mostly things that will get better with time and practice. All I can say is, keep writing and getting better.
I will say now though, Rainbow having an alternate identity based purely around arrogance and self aggrandisement is certainly a good idea, and one I do want to see fleshed out more fully.