A letter from Rainbow Dash to Fluttershy about how Rainbow feels for Fluttershy.
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I am 18 years old. I love MLP:FIM obviously. My favorite characters are Derpy Hooves, Vinyl Scratch, and Pinkie Pie. If you want to know anything about me just ask.
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A bit confusing with the mention of a computer and of hand holding, but also referring to Fluttershy as a mare. Is this supposed to be some anthro alternate universe? Since there's no narrative context to go by, you're kind of just left with the abstract idea of these characters rather than a specific embodiment.
There wasn't enough to really draw me in, but there are some decent hints at an interesting backstory, and the narration is pretty solidly told through Dash's voice.
Thank you for bringing these points up. I'll be sure to change them, as I get that it is confusing. I guess I got so into my writing, I didn't realize that, I was switching between, Pony and EQG.