Sunset Shimmer is a wonderful, loving girlfriend. Her girlfriend knows this. The only problem?
She has two girlfriends.
Entry for the 2018 Sunset Shimmer "Journeys" Contest, led by Oroboro.
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- Member Since 26th Aug, 2018
- offline last seen May 11th, 2020
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Poor Twilight.
There's a few days left. You might have wanted to use them. This story doesn't so much end as it stops, leaving the characters in the lurch in the middle of the conflict. The good news is that you've left me wanting more. The bad news is that you did it by writing something that feels unfinished.
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Unfortunately, I just don't know where to go with this. I would love for there to be more, I just... don't know what else. Perhaps sometime in the future, I'll figure out what to do... I hope. Idk.
Also, I am deathly scared of standard moderation queue times. Regardless, worst case scenario is that I got some writing practice in, right? Anyway, thanks for doing contructive feedback there.
I'm all for rejected Sunlight (God Empress Twilight, knows that). But in most cases, Sunset at least has the deceny to not be a two timing bitch.
Also you took the cheap way out by not properly finishing this and just leaving it like that. This is why I don't do contests. More freedom to do what you want with a story and not worry about anything.