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"The fuss on the fireworks because they're pretty."

Fuse.

This is brilliant! Can’t wait for more.

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Fixed. Thanks for catching that.

Seems like a fun concept so far. I can definitely see Aria participating in a boxing ring, ‘Dagi seducing the Think Tank and Sonata trying to recreate tacos.

"Biggest Badass Bitch Ever!" Sonata shouted. "You name it, Mommy beat the ever living fuck out of it."

She sounds like a less insane tiny tina

"Aria's sexy fun time toy, Mr. Buzzy"

"AARRGGGAARRWWW!" Adagio barely caught a screaming, infuriated, and blushing Aria before she could strangle Sonata.

"Last one before your sister kills you." Doc Mitchell said quickly.

Yes Doc, do it before this gets kinkier :rainbowlaugh:

Man I can't wait to see how Sunset fits into all of this craziness. :rainbowlaugh: You already seem to have 'straight men' with Aria and Adagio, but those seem to be internal to the group so Sunset could be one to the three as a whole. Then again she could just be filling in the role of Sunny Smiles, but at the same time you've kept in Doc so who knows.

Also I think you forgot to include Adagio's Speech score. The other two have one, and one of her traits specifically gives her an increase to it.

Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

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