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riicky83


Sunset Shimmer is my dream girl.

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I'm beginning to like where this is going. Keep going, mate.

this is a school i would love to be in. i mean sex whenever is kinda much but it is nice

So does this mean this story will have futa in it? I don't like those kind of stories.

Damn now this is a School I would LOVE to go to, hope you do a chapter on the Sex Ed class with Sunset and Can D. Cane, also is that a 'One Piece' reference there giving him the middle initial of 'D'?

8983846 Well unless Twilight accidently casts a spell they'll be no futa's, outside of certain vids futa's are not really my thing.

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Didn't think of One Piece when I did that I was just trying to make his name sound like Candy Cane but keeping it masculine instead of feminine.

If only my school was like this...

Anyway, you have good taste in fetishes, more!




Now where can I find that video? It sounds very relevant to my interests.

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Well still even if you didn't mean to do it like that it's cool how you added it without even knowing it at the time.

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You can find said video on Derpibooru in the search part type in "webm, Starlight Glimmer, Sunset Shimmer, Futa" and you will find the video easily, I don't think it would be a good idea to post the video of it right in here so I'm not going to do it.

“Got this idea from a 3d animation I saw that BlackjrXIII did of a Futa Starlight in the toilet masturbating before Sunset comes in and gives her a hand.”
You are one kinky fucker. Send me the link.

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He has done several camera variations on the vid too, the one I prefer is the Starlight POV version, all I have to do is imagine that Starlight is a male and I'm pretty much good to pretend that Sunset is doing it to me instead of Futa Starlight.

Damn now that was a great chapter, any chance that he will fuck any of the girls or teachers without a condom, I wouldn't mind seeing him knock up Celestia or Luna, maybe Harshwhinny too.

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To be honest I haven't though about pregnancy in this story, the next chapter will probably have unprotected sex but chances are I might have them on the pill.

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Okay, but will he ever get to fuck one of the female teachers in the future, I would LOVE to see him screw Miss Harshwhinny into the ground.

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Probably as I did at least tag Celestia and Luna, I still have space to tag one more character.
I haven't watched any of the equestria girls outside of the first movie so as for teachers I've no idea who teaches at the school.
I might have Miss Cherilee stay with the juniors school so she'll be out of the question.

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Well I saw Miss Harshwhinny in the MLP EQ-Girls Comic so I know she's in the High School.

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Is there any other teachers? I'm kinda debating on if I should add Harshwinny or not, if there are more teachers is the others tag appropriate to use for multiple other characters?.

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Well I know that Spitfire is a Gym Teacher along with Soarin, I don't know of any other sexy females who are teachers.

Damn, two chapters in the same day and you went with Spitfire in the Shower with Applejack and Rainbow Dash, I can't wait to see how you have Can D. Cane meet up with Sci-Twi, Rarity and Pinkie Pie, of course I would LOVE to see if Princess Twilight were to come over from Equestria for a visit and meets him too.

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Well the two chapters are kinda on different days for me, mind you with you mentioning Princess Twilight I might come up with a scenario where Can D Cane does both Twilight's at the same time.

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OH Yeah, Twin-cest it best, the only thing I could think of is if he got it on with Celestia and Luna and that would be either the Principal's or the Princesses.

Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore

Ok, have to be honest im not a fan of this chapter. Putting in pony twilight really wasnt necessary, but it wasnt bad ill give it that much. Im just getting tired of authors trying to cram her into every story possible.

Are there actually any other guys at this school?

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Think of it like the movies, there are guys at the school but how often did you see the main 6/7 interact with them?

It seems interesting, but could use some work on the writing. Far too many uses of the word 'I'. It all just reads kind of awkwardly.

I vote for ALL the girls.
I eagerly await thethrilling sequel!

Sweet, but what about the adults, any chance one or more of them would later find out the pill or whatever they took didn't help them and they find out they have become pregnant by Can D. Cane.

Okay.... was that back story meant to be an exercise on how ridiculous it can get? If so you gotta reach a little hard.

the sheer speed at which this goes i cant ever go more than a couple sentences before laughing at the ridiculousness of it all

Mindless sex
Mindless sex
Mindless sex
Mindless sex
A harsh look at the tragic effects of human trafficking.
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Mindless sex

I wish and hope that there'll be a sequel to this

The premise has promise, but I’d advise better formatting. Remember to make a new paragraph when a new speaker starts and that when said speaker begins a sentence the first word should be capitalized. Not having such things makes reading a tad difficult.
An editor might be able to assist, and I think there are groups of editors that do work for free. Either way, good stuff - from the two or three chapters I’ve skimmed - so stick with it and maybe spruce it up a tad.
Improvement is never a bad thing, nor is practice.

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what do you expect from a school where sex is prevalent

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