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Cadenza Heartsong


Hello! I'm primarily a pony musician, but I enjoy reading and writing as well. Please feel free to check out my work; I do hope you enjoy it!

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Plagued by a particularly troublesome composition, not even her favorite cup of tea can quell the churning storm of Octavia's thoughts. Perhaps an old memory might serve as a greater muse...


Cover art by OverlordNeon: deviantArt / Tumblr

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

Really enjoyed this, and needed a boost this afternoon. Great work :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope the rest of your day is a pleasant one~

Ahhhhh, incredibly gorgeous. I love how this is structured and the described beauty of music, really great job!!! :heart:

Ooh, this is a really elegant pretty story. I like it! ^^

This was an adorable reading! Inspiring, cute and makes me feel warm ^^
Looking forward to your next writings! :rainbowkiss:

This was a wonderful read, Cadenza. I absolutely adored the flashback of her onstage, awaiting her first performance. That brought to mind my first performance I seriously played at, although I resent that I wasn't able to learn my part, nor was the amplifier turned on. And by the time I realized it, I couldn't do it without attracting attention! But besides that, everything held true. The nervous anticipation of standing behind on stage. That fervent passion of a musician, what drives us to create, play, and elicit the emotions of others. It's how we heal as human beings (as well as horses!), and I loved to see that in your writings. Thanks for writing it! It's an amazing story, I'd love to see you try writing more.

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Thanks, Radiant! Hers is a story of passion, and one that I can personally relate to, for I had the selfsame experience with my early forays into music performance. I'm glad you were able to feel it too, especially as a musician yourself. 💜🎵

i approve

This is awesome, i really love it, cadenza you just make a great job, you should put this story into a book, and publish this book, so people in intire world can read this story, cause this story so awesome. :ajsmug:

Very well written, nice job!

An excellent story. A little more wordy than I’m usually used to, but none the less I loved reading it!

Really enjoyed this fic! Very pretty and inspirational. Well done!

Bravo! Encore, encore!

Very enjoyable read. Loved the favor towards more descriptive words. A very pleasant change from the norm. Also the story itself was beautifully told and very sweet. Well written and very well thought out. Bravo.

A lovely little story

There is so much to like here, but I think that you could had benefited from quite a bit of trimming. There are some telly parts which do little more than repeat what you showed in previous paragraphs, and that affects the pacing of the climax considerably. The framing device in the coffee shop was also slightly mishandled, not fitting all that well with the middle section.

Still, really nice characterization work here, and I hope to read more from you!

one of the worse fics i read in my life loool

This was a lovely and cozy little story. Really embodying the slice of life genre!

This was an excellent read. The narration befits Octavia in terms of diction and syntax.

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