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That was... weird.
fucking teriable
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1053183 I've seen your comments on three different stories, and I fucking love your Nope Gifs.
I won't read this. This is just the most disturbing concept I have heard about all day.
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Please if you will, how is it disturbing? I tried to write it to be kind of romantic, for a speedfic anyway, what with the confession Spike makes anwyway and they are all adults as this is set about 8 yoears down the road so I fail to see where there might be a problem to the average reader.(also free of:scat gore vore futa and just about anything of that variety that you care to think of.)
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Still screwed up. Won't read.
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What I was trying to say is, perhaps you could tell me what exactly you are having problems with after all, I am the writer so perhaps I can learn from the mistake and write a better story next time, you know avoid making the same mistakes and all that.
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Same reason I don't read Fluttershy clopfics, it is just kind of pushing what you can get away with IMO. (I mean with the community not ,legally)
How so? Spike and Sweetie are friendly enough and Spike has enough of a crush on Rarity that it makes sense that once he realised she was too old for him that would be displaced onto Sweetie Belle, similar enough that subconsciously he is satisfied and yet different enough that consciously he can grow to love her for being her not because of her sister. At least that was my reasoning when I wrote this as to why it might happen. Also add in the fact that Spike had time to think when she left Ponyville so when she came back all these pent-up feelings came to light. Makes sense to me but I guess I can see where you're coming from.
If you wouldn't mind though how EXACTLY is it pushing the limits?
I iked it.I dont know you guys hatin but come on it was a nice change of pace.Keep making awsomness my good friend.
Not bad. I think you could have done better though.
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You shouldn't bother with comments by people who won't even read your work. After all, what's the point of leaving comments like "I don't like it, even though I have no idea what's in it" except to be a jerk?
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So I guess I tend to look for reviews from readers so I can feel out what they do or do not like that way I can entertain the audience better. The better I do, the more fun everypony has and the more likely I am to keep writing it. I figure there must be a market for this sort of story as I have seen a couple of Spike/Harem floating around and I decided to try to one-up that and take it to the next level while maintaining a serious storyline instead of just saying stuff along the lines of "Spike walked into his house and every mare ever was naked in his living room" because while that would accomplish the goal of the story it would be neither fun to write nor fun to read, and that is why people read any story at all is to have fun, be entertained, and ultimately relax. Whoo! that was a long comment
That's good advice except the primary reason I write is to entertain others, and a surprising number of people like pony porn so here I am
For some reason I thought this was on GLBC so I am sorry if some of those sentences didn't seem applicable but mains the same
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I really enjoyed this. I have no idea what the heck everyone else is talking about.
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Thanks! new chapter for GLBC should be up soon!
1304795 is that another of your stories. What dose it stand for,
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It's the flagship in my armada of fanfics, Good Luck Better Circumstance. It is one of the more ambitious projects I have undertaken and I plan to see it to completion. Definitely give it a look and let me know what you think if you want, k?
liked this though it seemed that the romance was a bit rushed
If you're still looking for suggestions, I might have one.
Try rewriting the story so that it takes place inside Spike's apartment. All the preceding stuff could used as conversation filler and the reader can get better acquainted with both partners before the act. Also, you might want to tone down the L-bomb. Spike can be thinking it, but he would need to be coaxed more if you want him to declare it.
I think there's a great story in here. Focusing on your pacing would really help a lot.