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If this story super duper mega awesome as "7 days in heaven", then Yaystatic.fimfiction.net/images/icons/thumb_up.png , faved
Told you all I would come back
I had a lot of fun writing this. Hope everyone enjoys it! And as always, feel free to provide constructive criticism.
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by the way forgot to say, your story "7 days in heaven" one of the best stories i read ever! and i read a lot lot of them, cuz im lazy bastard that loves read fanfics haha
Good start.
Oh btw I thought this looked pretty boring, but my judgement told me to read it as soon as I read your name :3 oh and Jace is my sister... Dont ask...
Now this was a nice little read. Can't wait to see you continue this
Any clues for how long of a wait for the next chapter?
962357 continue or I'll kill you and then eat your brain to gain your awsome fic writing powers
Haven't read yet. I'll post a chapter review when I do. The idea seems great though.
I'm in love with this story
You deserve these -----> i.imgur.com/nuR4V.gif i.imgur.com/XpOzi.gif
Mmmyes.
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This pleases me.
As always, I am excited to read your stories (two so far but fuck it they are awesome)
Awesome! Can't wait to read more!
My avatar says it all. Also, what the fuck happened to the innocence?!
Anyways, even if it is a little bit darker than my normal choice in fics, this shall do nicely. Keep it coming. 
Hey! Why didn't you tell me this was up?!
I was waiting!
Anyway, looks like you're getting some great feedback on this, can't wait to have a look through the next chapter!
MLPDavester- No idea, but I promise I won't take as long to update as I did on 7 Days. Promise.
Bookmaster- I don't think that's how that works... but just in case, I'm wearing a helmet.
Hubord68- Where's dat review dog?
JeremyPunk- You are officially the coolest person, with magnanimous taste in television.
Thaylien- Sorry dude, had a brain fart.
Glad everyone is enjoying it! Tell your friends, if they're into that sort of thing. Thanks
HORRY SHEET
Applebloom would be like my best friend due to her rowdy attitude...and her drinking habits xD
it has a few problems... but overall I'd say it was very good
applebloom is one badass chick!
i demand an update.]
Okay, the new update is here! Woo, I finally did it, all right! So, a few things-
-The new blog post kinda wigged me out a little- but I think the characters have enough resemblance to their MLP counterparts, and it's well written enough that it will avoid any sort of trouble.
-Next (chapter? Not really chapters, but whatever) update is being written, so it shouldn't take like a month this time.
-As always, I welcome all comments, and (constructive) criticisms. Thanks!
Oh, and derp, rating is now mature because of boobies and such.
W00T! And so the action begins.
As well as the drama. And dem tits...
*smacks forehead* ugh, perv...But yes, dem tits.
Called it I knew Scootaloo was gonna be gay.
OH MY GOD UPDATE!!!
Criticism: I like the new pacing that switches from character to character. It makes the story much more interesting learning about the all the characters problems. I also find it a little disorienting when it got to the end though. The applebloom scene felt just a little bit rushed, but other wise it was fantastic.
Keep doing what you do. I love this story.
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That's an easy one to figure out, the rushed nature of the scene that is. The reason it feels rushed is because it's a rather important event *after* the real important event of this chapter. Had it been me, I'd have cut this for a later day, possibly as the climax to it's own chapter, and finished this one up with another Sweetie Belle going to bed scene, to balance out the one earlier on in the chapter, possibly noting how her room felt different to her this time - knowing that Spike liked her. That said... I don't know where this is going, so I'm assuming making the ScootaBloom has a relevance in the timeline (Jayce here likes to write in 'days', if you hadn't noticed from his earlier fiction work).
Keep reading, the boss will keep writing!
I just found this fic and it's pretty good so far. I like that it tackles each of the CMCs and it feels pretty believable, I like romance, drama, and slice of life and I'm getting that from this so I'll look forward to the next chapter.
This was a beautiful chapter
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Well, that escalated quickly
That was fucking awesome. I want more Plz.
New chapter later today or tomorrow. Took me long enough, I know.
You wrote Applejack instead of Applebloom in there. I can't really point it out from my phone, just a heads-up.
1354729 Caught it, changed it. Thanks dude.
Always nice seeing your stuff pop up! Good chapter!
Actually, I'm more surprised that you left my comment in there than anything else...
This is still so great why end it here, but 7 days maybe could update? That Is pretty awsome.
1355005 Not ending the whole story here, just the chapter. Sorry if that wasn't clear.
1355582 HA excuse my stupidity on that.
YES FINALLY UPDATE
Although the style of this chapter was different I still enjoyed it quite thoroughly. It was a fresh breath of something new and unique to the stories feel. I can't wait for the next update though. I am very excited!
....I thought this was dead.
YOU'RE ALIVE FICY! :D
Thanks boss, also: nice job.
"pair of star crossed lovers"
Shakespeare reference never gets old!
Also hurray for updates!
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You said you fixed the name swapping 3 Days ago, but I still see it..
Here's where it's Applebloom
"Do you wanna come in?" Scootaloo motioned to the door. Applebloom nodded, and Scootaloo led them inside. When Scoot closed the door behind Applebloom, the red-head sighed. She was just going to have to come out with it. It might hurt Scootaloo, but she needed to make her feelings known.
"Scoot, listen-" her words were cut off. Scoot had embraced her.
"I'm sorry." Scootaloo's voice came out in harsh gasps, as if she was desperate for air. "You don't deserve this. I care about you so much. But... " Scootaloo took a few steps back, turning her face to try and keep her friend from seeing her expression. "Every time I see you now, I just feel confused. No, not even when I see you. Whenever I think about you, everything starts to get weird. You're my most loyal and loved friend, and I never imagined that I'd want anything more then that. Especially since... well, you know."
Then Suddenly! Applejack goes Ninja & swaps place with Bloom
"Know what?" Applejack took a step closer to Scootaloo, staring her straight in the eye.
"Well, we're both..."
"Girls. Yeah, crazy world we live in," snarled Applejack. "It must be so tough admitting that you like other women. I have no idea what you're going through." Scootaloo shook her head sadly.
"That's just it... you don't," sighed Scootaloo. Applebloom could only stare at her, open mouthed.
Suddenly, Bloom appears from God knows where & swaps place for a second
"I'm sorry, what?" asked Applebloom. "Are you bein' serious?"
"Dead," answered Scootaloo. "You see, when you came out, you had friends and family that would accept you. It was hard, but you knew you could get through it. But me... no, I don't think I could. I know it was tough, but when it really comes down to it, you had it easy. Not to mention, you told me that you had feelings for girls your entire life. Well, I haven't. I dated boys through high school, not because I had to, but because I wanted to. I had fun with them... I was attracted to them. I even loved some of them. But throughout all that, I had feelings for you. I felt so conflicted. I wasn't sure what I was."
And Jack's back
"Then why put a label on it?" Applejack put an arm around her friend.
Then Bloom Swaps back and is here to stay, sweet lord hallelujah.
"I guess," sighed Scootaloo. "This is a lot to take in. I'm not exactly..."
"Open to this sort of thing?" nudged Applebloom. Scootaloo nodded. "Well, maybe you should be. Better to try this stuff out now while you're young then when you're committed to a family."
Pardon the long comment, just wanted to make sure that it was easy to point out.
Happy to see you being alive again
1372455 Holy crispy crackers. I shall fix that immediately... don't know how that got by me. I blame rap music. But thanks, I appreciate it.
More coming?
updates?
Woah, I remember seeing this when I first made my account.
Still no updates?
Did something happen?
Also, I apologize if this annoys you...
Well, since it's only September 22nd, how was this updated the 29th?
Now, I know you haven't always bee fast with updates, but it has bee over a year now; that's kinda pushing it.