Pinkie Pie decides to visit Applejack in the late afternoon. She asks Applejack if she can help buck apples. Not really expecting her to do a great job, Applejack lets her help. After she bucks a few trees, Applejack realizes that Pinkie is a lot stronger than she looks. The party animal, and the Workhorse, They say opposites attract, You're going to find out, just how true that is.
Author's Note: This is my very first fanfic ever. I understand that there are going to be mistakes, But please, if you don't have anything constructive or nice to say, don't comment. Thank you.
Chapters (6)
That's a lot of misplaced commas in the description.
This story could really use an editor, but otherwise it's a pretty decent story.
How are they gonna explain this to their friends?
1556426 I've been trying to get a friend of mine to Edit it. but he's being evasive >_<
1557200 No idea honestly, i don't plan to write a sequel, i had a hard enough time writing this one alone.
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If you need an editor, hit me up.
1559099 I know the story is fast paced, I can't help that. It took me like.. 3 months to finish chapter 6, cause of a serious case of writers block. So even if i Wanted to make it longer by a couple of chapters, i don't think i could.
As far as the tense issues, I don't have the ability to write things in one tense specifically. Tell me which tense you think would make more sense for the entire story, and i'll see what i can do to edit the story.
<dripping with sarcasm> I wonder where this is going.
I haven't seen too many Pinkie shippings.
1561506 I can't tell, do you like the fic or not..?
Aww cute
1562929 this was to good, I swear I feel tears of joy for Pinkies survival welling in my eyes.
The rest of the main 6 totally didn't give a fuck =…=" so it seems. Good story tho
3490980 i'm glad you liked my story, i tried to make it feelsy without making it boring
3557963 yeah i know i should've made more chapters where they visited pinkie in the hospital too, but i had writers block for so long that i just wanted to finish what i was thinking.