When Twilight boards the train to Ponyville for the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration, she expects nothing unusual- just some noise and some comfortable reading time. Only, she becomes convinced of Nightmare Moon on the morning of- only to realize it's too late. Now, without any friends, she must locate the Elements of Harmony and use them against the Nightmare- but is that even possible?
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Still not clear how/why she suddenly decided NMM was a problem and not a myth, though.
Otherwise, it sounds interesting so far. (which might be because it is rather surprising that the original group actually succeeded, despite the fact that it worked -- see Maxim 43 :D )
I LOVE the Maxims. Heheheh. (The webcomic they came from is even better, but the maxims alone are hilarious.)
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I'm not sure on that one either- perhaps she realized it was talked about as a prophecy in a history book... but only connected the dots after sleeping on it XD
Uh oh... Metal... in a cave...
This is ALSO going to be a Bolo story, won't it...
If so, don't do so TOO soon. There needs to be some noble-bashing first. :P
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Yes, this is another Bolo crossover. Yes, it's going to be quite a while before the Bolo is fully capable.
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Lol. You caught me by surprise with that one, I must say. I thought it was going to be simply an interesting AU.
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(It's had the crossover tag on it since before it was published...?)
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DARN IT! HOW DID I MISS THAT?!
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Yep, that's about what I was wondering, too.
A Commander that isn't Fluttershy?! I enjoy the dichotomy of such a concept, but it's pleasant to see something new!
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You'll notice An Alloyed Hope has an RD commander as well. Not that 'commander' means much there... Or here.
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I did notice; I was poking some harmless fun at a majority pattern. I still enjoy all these stories, and I appreciate that you're switching up some story elements; I can't help but be eager for the next chapter of any of these Bolover fics!
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Ahh, makes sense- and yes, Flutters has been the pattern... Ever since Crashland: Equestria, not one story has had a Flutter Commander... meaning Alloy Hope, Nightmare, and Fire & Thunder's rewrite.
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F&T(R)? I'll have to check back in on that one.
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Ah, the Spider of Steel. The One with the Rock Wolves? I could have sworn that Flutters was made the Commander, but if you say s-
Right, I forgot; the mystery pony. I suppose I'll see soon enough.