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Is this all focused on high school vore?
This is exactly like every other school vore story in existence. No world set-up, no real character formation, little attention to the setting.
As by-the-numbers as it gets. The only positives are that the grammar is better than usual for this stereotype story, and that some victim actually fought back successfully.
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That's where you're wrong my friend, vore is just a small part of the story, it may come up here and there, but it won't be that much.
Here’s a drinking game for all you masochists out there: Take a shot every time a character nods, shakes their head or rolls their eyes.
Spoiler: You’ll probably die.
I'm going to put a like and say good job. I'll die later anyway. So.. like before I go...
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I wouldn't say 'probably', more like it's guaranteed that you'll die.
Well, that was the weirdest story I think I've ever read. I've never read a vore fic before, so tgis was a first, and I can't say I regret it. Apart from a few un-jarring grammar flaws, this was very good.
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Doing that with milk would kill you, let alone alcohol.
It's a little too heavy on the vore as it introduces tons of characters I think, which makes it hard to keep up with. I would more expect this chapter to be in the middle of a fic, not as our introduction. You should consider making a prolog that introduces just 2 or 3 characters.
It also has a somewhat odd feeling...like the POV is drunk, everything flowing together.