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CoastalSarv
Old donkey from the north. Likes pie and strong black coffe.Avatar by KeePony: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/KeePony
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Not brilliantly written, but very amusing to read! I had honestly expected all those muffins to be something else.
you know, i did not see that ending comeing
herp de derp to me
WUT????!!!!!!!!!!!
dat ending??
ahhahaha that ending...lulz I should have noticed the double entedre's with the muffin AND I DID but I ignored the possibility that muffins meant sex but was I wrong.
4stars! I'd give you 5 but I'm not one for lesbian ponies
Sooooooo......does Pony Eric Idle come in afterwords and say 'Say no MORE' or what?
Oh, lawdy lawdy. That was a good laugh.
Dat ending, man. Totally worth the read.
first i thought the "muffins" means sex
I expected that but it still funny. Derpy\Berry actually makes sense.
... you got me kind sur. you got me good.
> so she would have to, say, rut with several unicorns a day for that to be likely
I see what you did there.
Ha ha! Twist Ending!
I lol'd
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I'm afraid it was mostly because Berry Punch seemed like the best pony to basically be loafing around not working in the middle of the day and, at least mentally, close to her bedroom, if you get my drift.
That made me lol. Bravo.
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BRB
That awkward moment when you realize just how dirty your mind is.
Yeah... I saw and didn't see that one coming, at the same time. Clever!
I could read the last few lines over and over again.
ROFL! that ending, I was like WTF!
This doesn't need the mature ra- Oh.. I see...
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Yeah. That sort of thing happens with the best movies: one word, and there goes your G-rating.
Well played.
wow...that...was...awkward...tho, i hope this isint the real story for durpy hooves
or els that might seem wierd, because i always thought it was doctor whooves who did it with her, not....berry punch 