Rarity sees herself in the market. It's definitely her, but it appears to be only an illusion because nopony else sees it, and they can walk through it with no trouble. She thinks it's just a trick, but when it comes back again inside the Castle of Friendship, Rarity starts getting concerned, she asks Twilight about it, but Twilight detects nothing with her wards. What might these apparitions want, and how can she get rid of them?
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Nice story so far. But you accidentally put poserful instead of powerful towards the end.
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Fixed it. Thanks.
This was both well written and chilling... I loved every second of it!
This was intense. I loved it so much.
Also thank you for this as it helped me brush up on my backward reading skills. Seriously when I first realised it was backward I'd spend like 30 seconds trying to figure out a sentence, by the end of the fic it was more like 10-12 if it has long words in it. And only 5-7 if it was short and simple.
This was a really good story. It was well-written. I love reading horror stories. However i can't stand Watching horror; i just cant handle it.
You did amazing with the creepy and you didn't focus on the scary; the perfect horror story formula. You only brushed up on the 'scary' parts scattered throughout the story and instead, focused on the mystery, thrill, and slow, tingling feeling in which you know something bad is going to happen.
This was a wonderful piece. Have a like and a fav. I really hope someone makes an animation of this, I would watch it!!! And then probably have to pray to Princess Luna that she'll protect me from my inevitable Nightmares to come... ... ...
Also what is the reflection? It has to be a single individual, judging from the ending. It would also have to be an evil being of some sort that gains power from darkness, fear, etc...
Such as the Nightmare (NMM), The Pony of Shadows (Castle-Mania), or The Shadow (Stygian)
Now somewhat afraid of my own reflection, Signing Out, VShuffler42
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Hah. Glad you enjoyed it. It was intended to give clues as to her true nature.
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I'm glad you liked it. As to the nature of the reflection, I will say nothing, because to explain my thoughts would be difficult. It can be whatever you want it to be.
Not many stories spook me but this one did. Though I hate mirrors with a burning passion, I enjoy this story immensely. Thank you.
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.