PLEASE NOTE: Strong language contained (it's rated T for a reason)
You know the drill; guy goes to convention, buys oddly specific item from merchant, and presto: new world, new people, new fuckton o’ problems. I found all three Atlamillia being sold by a merchant, so of course, I bought the lot of ‘em, for just 60 bucks. Now I’m stuck in a world full of talking technicolor horses. Should I mention I was turned to stone the minute I arrived?
This is a displaced Fanfic, I do not own anything.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is a Hasbro product
Dark Cloud is a SONY Entertainment and Level 5 product
Chapters (3)
Very interesting, if a bit fast-paced at times. Try to slow down and be a little more descriptive with what's going on.
8563607
I will keep that in mind, I appreciate the feedback.
8563621
No problem.
Is this gonna be like fuck it I'm having fun?
8567887
for the most part, yes, though later on, i want some rather serious events to transpire.
without getting too wordy about it, i suck at writing in general, so don't expect great things.
I mean...it's not bad?
8567894
you'd have to define 'bad' the main character isn't evil, soooo...
8567897
It's not a bad story but it goes along very fast.
8567912
yeah... not really good at pacing, working on it, once i've got it down, i'll rewrite the chapters i fucked up in.
8567917
thank god, Im not a fan of fast storys.. it just gets jumbled up and all