After getting a little crazy mini celebration in Zecora's hut for her act of kindness (or superheroes, in Rainbow Dash's case), a potion accidentally landed on Rainbow's head, causing her to act and sound like a foal. Will Twilight and her friends be able to foalsit her properly, for 48 hours, without breaking a sweat?
MY FIRST FANFICTION!! Please tell me what you think and any improvements I should make :3
BTW this wasn't MY idea.. It was my younger sister's!
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For your first fanfic, I think this is a nice start for the most part. Keep it up.
Also, while I get that her friends are suppose to take care of her, you should bring in RD's parents for help; that's assuming you haven't thought of that already.
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Interesting story idea! I just don't understand what the bit with the Daring Do book had to do with anything, as if it were better if that were left out and you cut to the point where the potion lands on Rainbow's head. It is going to be a lot of fun seeing how she reacts now!