Comments ( 16 )

Great fic jabronie don't ever stop writing :pinkiehappy:

HOLY SHIT BRAIN IDEA!!!!

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Oh snap! what is it?

Can't be explained in public friendo:trollestia:

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:rainbowlaugh: TheHighlander came up with that one

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Tell me when u finish :pinkiehappy:

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It's not funny unless you get it the first time

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Mirage was everypony's friend

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

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honestly when he was having that nightmare with Vinyl in the bubble, i thought "Aw, hell naw" but then at the end i was saying "God damn it! Fuck no! NO! NOO!!!"

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Glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

but im still sad :fluttercry:

Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this! It was so tragic but so fun to read! You have the best ideas! :rainbowkiss:

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Ah, yes. I do agree this story was a bit on the contradicting side, I guess I had forgotten about the weaknesses as I wrote the story. Like you said, it was also very fast, and I regret not drawing it out for longer. Thank you for the criticism.

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