935127 Well I really like your writing style. Actually it's what inspired me to put my ideas down on paper. In fact, if you tried, I think you could pull off a book. It would take a lot of work (I tried to write a book. I got about.... two thirds of the way through and quit.) but I'm sure you would come up with something good.
*darkness shrouds the town because of spirit element pony* (nerdy voice with lisp) "It appears you have, activated my trap card" *sonic rainboom turns the sky back to normal*
Beautiful chapter! But, I think that I hate you with a white-hot passion. How could you do that to Spitfire!? Do you have some sick grudge against her or Rainbow? Honestly, I think I would have been more okay with it if you had drawn it out, made her suffer, and then gave a more graphically detailed execution. I love Spitfire and I feel that a quick death did not give my emotions enough time to catch up and let me cry my eyes out.
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935127 Well I really like your writing style. Actually it's what inspired me to put my ideas down on paper. In fact, if you tried, I think you could pull off a book. It would take a lot of work (I tried to write a book. I got about.... two thirds of the way through and quit.) but I'm sure you would come up with something good.
ah i see you used the edited version of the prologue, thanks makes me feel special lol
yusss
aww... you countered my black out... o well, i dont think you can injure me in an intense way.
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ER MEH GERD!!! THAT CHAPTER WAS AMAZING YOU FRIENDO HAVE JUST GAINED A FOLLOWER
I liked it :3.
*darkness shrouds the town because of spirit element pony*
(nerdy voice with lisp) "It appears you have, activated my trap card"
*sonic rainboom turns the sky back to normal*
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You know, you just made my day... Thank you
that was a great chapter
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Don't mention it Mirage :D
It's just a joke that got its way into my boyscout troop over summer camp by this kid named Austin. I'm happy it made you laugh
Hmm... This story has my intrests keep me posted.. I may have a probosition for you at a later date
Beautiful chapter! But, I think that I hate you with a white-hot passion. How could you do that to Spitfire!? Do you have some sick grudge against her or Rainbow? Honestly, I think I would have been more okay with it if you had drawn it out, made her suffer, and then gave a more graphically detailed execution. I love Spitfire and I feel that a quick death did not give my emotions enough time to catch up and let me cry my eyes out.