Okay, I just finished the book.... That was good. I can't believe that mirage died... The fight would have been more epic if aero, mirage, night flash, and Luna teamed up on clestia, dominating her in seconds, leaving her helpless, slowly killing her, torturing her. Cut her horn off, slowly break every bone in her wing. Then cut them off, then when it came to killing her, pinkie turns into the pinkimina Diane pie from cupcakes and tortures her beyond belief. All in all good book.
I do not even know what I read. I know it was reallt good and did not disturb me bacause i did not have to keep stoping. I did not cry at all so it was not horribly depressing but I am still confused as to what exactly it was. I do know It does deserve a favorite though.
This was a really good story. As with all stories, there are some parts that I believe should be changed up a bit or at least added to. When you were making Vinyl a Warewolf, I was expecting you to have her kill Mirage. I liked the fight scene at the end, though in my opinion, it could have been the tiniest bit more detailed and drawn out. I thought that you having Dash say to Soarin', "Say hello to Spitfire for me" before she killed him was a bit off. It should have been more like "see you in hell" or something because you were implying that Soarin' and Spitfire were going to see each other in the afterlife.(please, no one rant on me about the afterlife and all the beliefs and stuff) All-in-all, you have earned another favorite from me. I look forward to reading the "Reboot" of this soon. Keep up the great writing!
The story seems to escalate REALLY quickly. One moment, they're fighting for one side,then they're fighting for the next, then Vinyl's a werewolf, then Mirage is dead, and it's over. Wut?
EDIT: Not only does this story go t fast, it contradicts itself. He says, two chapters earlier, "'Only three things can kill me, Silver, Sharp Wood and Garlic.'" So, he obviously isn't dead. They're gonna end up sealing him in the ground for nothing, because lack of air, isn't mentioned there. Also, Celestia doesn't stab him with wood or silver to make sure, and she doesn't kill him with garlic, so he isn't dead.
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MIRAGE DIED
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Sadly, yes... he did
but what a good father
Okay, I just finished the book.... That was good. I can't believe that mirage died... The fight would have been more epic if aero, mirage, night flash, and Luna teamed up on clestia, dominating her in seconds, leaving her helpless, slowly killing her, torturing her. Cut her horn off, slowly break every bone in her wing. Then cut them off, then when it came to killing her, pinkie turns into the pinkimina Diane pie from cupcakes and tortures her beyond belief. All in all good book.
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I do not even know what I read. I know it was reallt good and did not disturb me bacause i did not have to keep stoping. I did not cry at all so it was not horribly depressing but I am still confused as to what exactly it was. I do know It does deserve a favorite though.
This was a really good story. As with all stories, there are some parts that I believe should be changed up a bit or at least added to. When you were making Vinyl a Warewolf, I was expecting you to have her kill Mirage. I liked the fight scene at the end, though in my opinion, it could have been the tiniest bit more detailed and drawn out. I thought that you having Dash say to Soarin', "Say hello to Spitfire for me" before she killed him was a bit off. It should have been more like "see you in hell" or something because you were implying that Soarin' and Spitfire were going to see each other in the afterlife.(please, no one rant on me about the afterlife and all the beliefs and stuff) All-in-all, you have earned another favorite from me. I look forward to reading the "Reboot" of this soon. Keep up the great writing!
The story seems to escalate REALLY quickly. One moment, they're fighting for one side,then they're fighting for the next, then Vinyl's a werewolf, then Mirage is dead, and it's over. Wut?
EDIT: Not only does this story go t fast, it contradicts itself. He says, two chapters earlier, "'Only three things can kill me, Silver, Sharp Wood and Garlic.'" So, he obviously isn't dead. They're gonna end up sealing him in the ground for nothing, because lack of air, isn't mentioned there. Also, Celestia doesn't stab him with wood or silver to make sure, and she doesn't kill him with garlic, so he isn't dead.