Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Woot! I quite liked the Silver bit, but I'd hate to be the first guy with Twist. That would have been a major turn-off.
Yay for silver?
I love the depravity of this story, and regardless of what sort of ending comes about, part of me really wants to see Twilight whoop some ass.
Fascinating. It seems deliciously ironic that if Fancy gets his way with Silver, she may very well end up disappointed. I can't help but think back to the old joke about the masochist who pleaded, "hurt me," and the sadist that sadistically replied, "no."
Twist's little excursion was about as intense as I'd expected. She really did have it worse than all the rest. A sharp contrast to Silver Spoon's experience. And considering what we saw happen to Twist here, I feel a twinge of concern and that returning dread that she was not mentioned as the focus of this chapter's title.
That tells me that she'll be mentioned in another chapter's title. I'm worried for that. Keep doing what you're doing.
The Depravity is just as bad (read good) as i had expected.
Sounds like Twist will the offering, but her appeal, the novelty of her innocence will be gone after this first time.
Looking forward to Sweetie's chapter and what Twilight will do when she finds out that Twist has been taken, though is sounds like she either knows or heavily suspects what has been going on for some time, and done nothing about it.
additional question: Isn't Dazzle one of the fan names for Twilight's Mother? Was that meant to be her?
I can't wait until spike gets there to save .
Something else I just realised.
Rarity should be very wary of Silver spoon, as Silver is a far better manipulator than Rarity gives her credit for.
Silver has the most powerful pony in Canterlot eating out of her hoof, a clear signal to anypony who may want to trifle with her. She has forgotten her place as the worthless broken toy, and Rarity needs to put this strumpet back in her place, but she can't without crossing Fancy, who wants to claim Silver for himself.
Well played, Silver, well played.
That dialogue... beautiful.
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I have the weirdest boner. Im so full of fuck right now icanteven......
While reading this story I felt my gut twisting like hell.
Please tell me they get thoroughly beaten up. Or perhaps disintegrated by the Princesses.
Or exploded by Twilight Sparkle.
Please continue a.s.a.p.
I can't wait a whole week to read how it's gonna continue
Really interesting analysis of the motives that takes some ponies (or humans) to do such a thing... the feeling of power... to be in control.
Plot is so interesting as the clop... congratulations, you have Twist's approval! (whether she like it or not. )
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That's Twilight's mother's name? Oh dear.
I had no idea that was a fan name for Twilight's mom! I just pulled the name out of my ass, actually, as well as the "light blue unicorn" description. It's definitely not intended to be her. I don't think Twilight's parents are anywhere near that rich or powerful (also, they are not foalphiles, which helps. So there you go, we finally have at least one pony in this universe who did not have a horrible abuse-filled childhood.)
Amusingly enough, someone on another forum read the "blue unicorn" description and thought that pony was supposed to be Trixie! Which I could kind of see, personality-wise, but I doubt a traveling magician who lives in a cart is going to have enough money to roll with Fancy's crew.
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Twilights mothers name is Twilight velvet. It's one the official wiki
I can't wait for this to update
Still loving this, I hope I get to see some rape in the next chapter, she is the cutest filly.
>There's...there's...got to be
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>ignore the terrible pain
Double space
1210307 >part of me really wants to see Twilight whoop some ass
I'd rather see her fuck some ass
Fuck yeah, Spike!
GO TWILIGHT SEND THESE FUCKERS INTO OBLIVION!
flip-cocks 2 shotguns OK, let's go in.
7532242 *Draws broadsword* Right behind ya.
In hindsight, I guess, it was obvious that the foal to suffer the worst fate would be Twist.
This series went from sexy and crazy to terrifying as fuck. What a wonderfully conflicting story you have here.
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Yeah, I wish I could say I'd planned it that way, but it kind of progressed that way naturally. Suffice to say that Silver wasn't the only one who was working through some stuff.