Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Good kob sweetie bell you are going to give your sister a filly that even princess molestia wouldn't touch
But....
Twist is so adorable...
Molestia don't know what she talkin' 'bout.
I'm curious as to how Rarity will deal to Twist.
I don't want to say this considering the nature of this fic but MOAR!
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Usurp power? In what twisted court? I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to disagree. Rarity herself hardly possesses anything vaguely approximating a modicum of 'power'; to put it in perspective, she kidnaps and tortures foals. Silver Spoon is loyal to her because she fetishises her cruelty and Sweetie Belle is dumbpony supreme. She doesn't even have any real psychological power beyond Sweetie Belle, and there is nothing in the excuse for a relationship she shares with Silver Spoon that could possibly provide any sort of structure for anything providing even a slight resemblance to 'usurpation of power'.
The only real parts in their little psychodrama are Rarity, Sweetie Belle and Silver Spoon, and Hamgravy has done a brilliant job of characterising their relations: Sweetie Belle has only disgust for Silver Spoon, Silver Spoon has only apathy for Sweetie Belle and Rarity has only lust for both. Besides Sweetie Belle and her boutique, Rarity has nothing; whatever fear she instils in anyone other than Sweetie Belle is scalar.
She is a terrorist of foals, no more, and it is impossible to usurp the position of the positionless.
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I guess I can't relate, being the oldest child who has a great relationship with his siblings.
I will concede that the characterizations in the story are well done, they just weren't what I was anticipating. I do apologize if I was overly-critical. I shouldn't judge a story because it isn't told the way I would do it.
I really don't want to discourage HamGravy. I can tell this sick story is a labor of love and he should continue it!
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Thank you so much for sharing that with us. Seriously, it must not have been easy. Respect.
I went into this chapter worried that I might get the sibling relationship wrong; I've never had a problem of that magnitude with my own siblings so it's outside of my experience. But the idea of the family bond surpassing all logic is something I can definitely understand, so I wrote from that. I'm glad you found it believable. Again, thank you.
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No worries, I'm not discouraged. It'll take more than that to stop me. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. Thanks for commenting.
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Never have I encountered such corrupt and foul-minded perversity... have you ever considered a career in the Church!?
939201 YOU UNBELIEVABLE ASSHOLE. I'm sorry, I know I should love and tolerate, but you should too! Outward appearance has nothing to do with anything. Name ONE character flaw that Twist has. Seriously, I can't think of one bad thing to say about her. I wear dorky glasses but I still have friends, I have autism, ADHD, and I'm a total math nerd, yet girls are FINE. Why? Because I'm nice at heart. You all go after a girl based on appearances, and I'm sure that if I wasn't so nice, I'd slap you. I kinda want to right now. And don't tell me you're just joking or trolling, because that's taking it too far. Love and tolerate above all else, if you can't understand that, then why are you a brony?
1090649 > You unbelievable asshole
> Love and tolerate
LOL, K. That's not hypocritical in the slightest.
i synthesize with twist's lisp issue. seeing that i have a stammer myself, i also used to think that i wasn't normal and was even a little jealous that most people don't have to worry about messing up saying their own names. until i realized that being this "normal" that twist is wishing to be isn't worth the hassle and my speech impairment is a part of me whether i like it or not. it's too bad that twist has such a horrible fate in this story before she really accepted who she was.
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1) Stop being so mad.
2) Love and Tolerate was never the brony's motto. It was a catchphrase just to troll brony haters on /b/. Using such motto only makes you look like a retard.
3) What is wrong with picking someone with good looks? A brain helps a lot, yes, but I love myself enough not to carry Stephen Hawking's babies.
4) FYI: Twist has little-to-none established personality. The dude is entitled to think whatever he wants about her.
>its only notable quality was that it offered a beautiful view
Double space
>It had only been two weeks
This should say "It had been only two weeks"
>I've got this stupid lisp
>have got
1090649 Holy shit, chill the fuck out
1090649 he was refenceing "ask princess molestia"
Hoboy...
This keeps getting badder and better.
*reads the title.. notices Spike*
OH haaaaaaaayyyyl no.
*reads the protective charm over him*
... phew.
Wait, Twilight knows?
Great job, Spike...
4109930 She might have heard some of Rarity's "victims" when on a nightly stroll
I don't know what's more terrifying, the fact that when Sweetie Belle begged Celestia for something to happen, and it happened, or the fact that Sweetie Belle will forever think that Celestia is an omniscient foal-napper.
The implications are gut-wrenching!
It would be even worse if Celestia is omniscient, and it was a test. Grah! So much internal conflict!
Noooooooo!! TWIIIIISSST!!!
(also, Twist x Spike )
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That was totally the wrong emoticon to use. Then again, maybe not...
Was there ever a time in this au when Rarity was treating Sweetie Bell well?