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You're a monster.
A magnificent monster.

This appeals to me.

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But Yes. So good.

Rarity?

Never been a huge fan of stories where a young colt is molested and begs for it to stop, only to pull a 180 and beg for it to continue, then come full circle and begs for it to stop again once the secret butt fun starts. I thought it all worked except for him begging for it to continue. The first and last of the chapter were bookended with fear and pain. I fell that it might have been stronger in the middle if his body was enjoying it, but he wasn't enjoying it mentally. Sort of a 'his own body betrays him' vibe. You explore the internal struggle of him thinking he's a bad colt for getting aroused and the molester could confirm this by saying only naughty colts get turned on. It starts to feel good, but he can't bring himself to admit it.

Good story, though. Keep going! (I personally can't wait to see how the other adults are portrayed.)

Your depravity...it feels so good on my body

why wonder why pipsqueake(sorry for the misspelling) is always being sodomized in some shape or form. poor thing.

>There was a rustling in the bushes
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that is all

I honestly have no idea how to feel about this series. While I had said I'd look through the Tarnished Silver series ... wow. Just wow. This is both the most messed up story I've read, but I can't stop reading it. A part of me is waiting to see the part of the story where Rarity gets her cummupance and Sweetie get's the help she needs. Another part is drawn to how well done this is done, and I can honestly say I've never read a story that left me confused on what emotion I was feeling while reading it. Or how I should feel reading it. So congratulations.

Hmm, that's probably where my double standards start to show up: Twist's chapter left me terrified, while I was totally okay with Pipsqueak being sodomized...

I love how broken he is already... Thinking about what might come next turns me on even more!

Why do I find this. Overwhelmingly adorable???

“My mum says one's allowed to touch me there!”

There seems to be a "no" missing that belongs between "says" & "one's".

That is all. Equestria is ours.