Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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FUCKING 'ELL! Things are getting more fucked up!
IT BEGINS! Really happy to see this update again.
Either there is going to be some sort of happy ending or a fucked up ending? I dont care just as long as i can enjoy it!
'All hope abandon, ye who enter here'. Incription above the gates of Hell
Twist, Run while you still have a slim chance of escape.
This thing just got real.
1122640 The Many loves of Pinkie Pie explicitly stated that something bad happens to Twist at somepoint, which will cause spike to leave ponyville.
thus I think the latter option is the likely one. Plus this is Dark Equestria, A happy ending has little place here.
Oh god. Things just keep getting worse and worse. My brain keeps telling me to flee, flee as if my sanity depends on it. But my hands refuse to click away from this story. The odds are stacked heavily against it, but I hope there is some way that they make it out of this okay.
i just wanna know what happens.... god I sicken myself
Well. I've never quite been seized by a story like this one has managed. Besides being seemingly immaculate from a technical angle, there was quite the genuine feeling of discomfort I noticed as I made my way through this latest chapter...and I realized that since the previous update, I'd been anticipating and somehow dreading what I'd see when this chapter got posted.
Silvie is also raising eyebrows, likely as much so in readers as inside the story; I'm very interested in seeing how much command of the situation she might end up taking. Dark and twisted as this all is (per the very title, so it's truth in advertising like I've rarely seen before), it's damned amazing and the feeling is not going away: I need to follow this to the end, and I'm terrified of what I'll see along the way. It's why:30am and I'm rambling so I'll stop. Just needed to put out there that I'm following the hell out of your writing.
HamGravy I am just enamored with the way your mind works. There is no series that has made me both afraid to read the next chapter and want that chapter to take it further. Your depiction of Rarity is just amazing and you manage to portray her motives perfectly truly creating a rich and full character without using many aspects of her from the show. I love the fear and elation going through Pip but Silver is truly your work of art. Her dedication to being a masochist for Rarity is just amazing! I just need more of this. If there were stars you'd have 5 of them!
This is getting eerily similar to the direction that my 120 Days of Blueblood story is going. It also features Fancy Pants, though in a more minor role. He's part of Blueblood's inner circle of libertines. Their philosophy is that the most important things in life are experienced through the physical senses. That which gives the body pleasure is the apex of existence. Things such as morality, chastity, fidelity and consent are unwanted stops along the path to pleasure. And as we all know...
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Haven't read your story (adding it to my queue) but I'm guessing we're both drawing inspiration from similar sources. I've read up on the Libertine movement, and I think Fancypants would definitely fit in with them. Any strong resemblance to De Sade's original 120 Days is mostly coincidental, though, as I've not read this work, and I'm not sure I want to. I hear it gets kind of...gruesome.
1143058 I said I SHOULD love and tolerate, not that I AM, so no hypocrisy. I just don't like people who rate others based on physical appearance. How can you say that doing so is a good thing?
They just keep getting better and better..
>“Touche, Fancy,” said Rarity
*Touché
>as our naive princess would have you believe
Is it not "naïve"?
This is horrifying and all but Fancypants is just too bond villain in this chapter to take seriously. Even though I've read this story before I still expect him to start idly petting a cat while explaining his evil scheme. Still a great story though.
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Well, he did idly pet a pussy.
But yeah, you're not wrong. If I could go back and write the whole thing again I would definitely give Fancy a bit more depth and personality than he has in these early chapters. But you have to remember that at the beginning, I had no idea what I was doing. But by the end of the series, I had absolutely no idea what I was doing. Thanks for reading!