Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Do you have ANY idea about the horrible glee I get when you update? DO YOU?!
the only reason i am reading this distrusting excuse for porn is because imagination is stronger then fact, this was far less brutal then what was going in my mind thankfully, i can feel at peace a little now....
...I hate you. Now I have to wait a WHOLE WEEK to find out what happens next >_< Guess in the meantime...I'll make some cupcakes
I Love This Story!
I hate that I love this and that makes me hate it more which just makes me love it more... Ooooohhhhh god make it stop
I always expected Hoity Toity to by that way.
I fucking support this!!
Ham, you are truly cruel! Nothing to do with the fic, rather it's the awful way you've make me look forward to Mondays! I can't get enough of this. Please continue sharing your work with the community.
I was so happy to see this early, but now I have to wait slightly longer...
So all at the same time I felt happy for and horrible for poor Pip in this one. With all the to-do about Silver, it was almost, ALMOST possible to forget about him in caught up in this mess. Glad he got some love, and for that matter, some lack thereof. Still waiting for the other horseshoe to drop with Twist. And for all the Circle does and is responsible for, I've actually got quite a bit of respect for this incarnation of Fancy Pants after everything we've seen of him. There may be more internal dialogue that we haven't seen, or how he behaves when out of the public eye, but that he's okay with throwing his status around to somewhat-noble ends? He may be a foalophile(?) of the highest degree, but he does seem to be possessed of more scruples than most.
This all sums up to a terrifying thought I had, and thought to share, when paired with his ruminations in the last chapter of being older: Unless Indigo somehow manages to make the cut, somepony far, far worse for morals will be leading the Circle in several years.
But that's all some time away, and we still have chapters to go, so I'll stop being like a wordy, red-sweater-wearing mr now, and wait patiently for those!
love it!
nothing else to say....
And i foresee that silverspoon will be fancy pant's doom....
Well, I know I don't want Silver Spoon to be taken by Fancy cause I like what she had going with Rarity. I kinda want Rarity to come to her defense, but I can't think of any reason for her to want to do that. Either way, I hope SS will be returning to Ponyville. Feel bad for Twist though. She is an adorable filly, but the Circle is just eating her up.
All these comments on how one should not like this fic but they love it anyway... Say, Hammy, are YOU Rarity?
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Well, I AM rather fabulous, so it's certainly a possibility, darling.
I hadn't noticed before, but you're right, there ARE a lot of "Oh my God, I hate myself for enjoying this" comments on my stories. Fun! I guess a lot of Twisted readers must identify with Pip in that sense...
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This is some good analysis, thanks! I'm trying to make sure none of the four foals feel like they're just space fillers. And Pip is just fun to write, so I'm glad people find him fun to read.
Why do I get so happy whenever you update?
WHY?!
There comes a point prior to which one enjoys deviancy for the sake of deviancy, and beyond which one can only manage a single thought:
"Well, shit."
I am now, mercifully, beyond that point. I'm a little relieved really; I didn't think I was ever going to find it at the rate I was going. Or, perhaps I'm just tired.
I guess we'll see. I'll sort it out in the interim, I suppose. If not, I look forward to continuing this journey in a new light.
I like it. It's hard to find a well written torture fic nowadays. I thoroughly support this
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Honestly? I had kind of a similar reaction after writing chapter 11. I felt like a limit had been reached, and when I had Fancy interrupt things, it was a relief for both Sweetie and myself. The sex isn't going away, (ha ha, not ever!) but Chapter 11 is the cloppiest, most envelope-pushing chapter I'll probably ever write. Of anything.
But don't hold me to that.
no not my boy pip the pimp why was he raped by a man but he got it in with shamrock though so you get a derpy for that
Ah man, I know I'm a sicko. But I was actually disappointed when didn't clean the dildo. I'm not into scat, but I am into extreme humiliation and degradation.
>He leaned over and kissed her son hard on the lips.
I do not understand this sentence
>and made her way to pip's side
"pip" should have a capital P
>of the bed. As she approached
Triple space
>Pip only had a vague idea
This should say "Pip had only a vague idea"
>Pip was young, and more than a bit naive. But he wasn't stupid.
I suggest making this one sentence (change the first period to a comma)
>kiss on the lips. Indigo rubbed
Double space
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>Chapter 11 is the cloppiest, most envelope-pushing chapter I'll probably ever write.
>Of anything.
>But don't hold me to that.
YUS
Kinda odd how there a big blank bit at the end, as if you pressed enter several times at the end.
What a family
6654618 right i kinda wanna know there story
ok i am so jeoules of Indigo Dream's kids, lucky litte bastard's