Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Wow just wow. More please
Damn this was a depressing chapter. nopony came out of this one smelling pretty.
Don't do it Sweetie Belle, don't become like Rarity. it would be her greatest masterpiece: the moment she broke you.
Great chapter as always.
Awesome chapter!
I hope Pip is not going to play dirty and evade Binding Oath spell by writing everything he knows instead of telling. Though considering that it was manipulative Rarity, I'm not sure that Binding Oath is an actual spell that exists and not a lie.
I loved this chapter! This was the only way it could end. Sheer brilliance from start to finish!
Mon doux doux plaisir coupable...
fuck you sweetie sll these years and you come up with that also silver will come to her sences if she goes home she should kill rarity an be friends with the cmc
Well this is...serious shit
Oh sweet Celestia, that reveal.
It's a shame that Sweetie is not more naturally inclined toward spite or consequentialism. In her position, the size of the sacrifice given to earn a small victory would not seem as great. Her actions in the previous chapter were very satisfying; finally, she responded to her circumstances in a way that I understood. Now, she looks poised to continue that path. "The ends justify the means" is an abhorred philosophy, sure, but in Sweetie's case I'm willing to give her some moral latitude.
*claps* Very very good. Not at all what I expected. Thank you very very much. Poor Silver.
SEQUEL!? SEQUEL!!!
SILVER CAN'T STAY OUT THERE! RARITY MUST GET WHAT SHE DESERVES!
No I don't.
Yes you do.
Yeth you do! You tho do!
WoW....
just.... W-O-W!!!!!
it was epic in so many different ways!
I just hope it is not the end!
So does your next story start Monday? Or do we have to wait a while?
dammit i need more! why do you have to be so good at suspense? i'm starting to anticipate this story more than season 3! and apparently i can't construct good sentences anymore, good job.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
MY FEELS
YOU BROKE THEM
YOU BASTARD! YOU BROKE MY FEELS WITH THAT REVEAL! Poot little Twist, hent and nieive..................much thadness
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Twisted still has one chapter to go! That will be posted on Monday. At that time, please check my blog for news on the next story.
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Well....wow. That is high praise indeed! Thank you!
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Glad you liked it! I agonized over that damn reveal, let me tell you. In my drafts folder there are about a half dozen other versions of the reveal of the Offering's identity, including one where we get to see the voting (scrapped because it seemed a bit predictable), one where I kept it hidden until the very last line of the chapter (scrapped because it felt cheap and made other passages impossible) and one where we found out it was Twist by process of elimination, by slowly revealing the names of the three foals in the carriage (scrapped because it was anticlimatic.)
Also, until I got about halfway through the story, the Offering was going to be Pip.
yea it wouldn't be wise to mess with pip or your own safety from me
I would love to see a spin off story about just The Gallery, lot's of clop potential there.
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Why would that be a bad thing.
> --- epilogue 1---
Why not use a [center] tag instead of those spaces?
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I'm hoping that at some point in one of the chapters in this or the next story there's a scene where someone utterly bitches Celestia out. That she would do nothing pisses me right the fuck off. I absolutely love the torture/rape/sadism/masochism is this fic, but some things I hold onto even in a fic like this. Two of those things are that if Twilight and Celestia aren't evil then they would not stand for this if they knew about it. I wouldn't mind having Celestia be one of the members of the circle. I've already read one story where she's just like the ponies in this fic. But I can't stand the idea that she would let these ponies get away with this if she's not one of them. Same thing goes for Twilight. I can't stand the idea that she would leave Sweetie Belle there and not help whatever the Princess told her to do.
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well I'm glad you worked so hard on that reveal, I cannot express the suspense I was feeling, just waiting for the mispronounced word that I had been dreading and would also seal Twist`s fate.
Rarity might be a monster, but you're a glorious one!
the metaphor for the stars was nice but it was way too forced. It woulda been more natural if you foreshadowed or themed the stars and fate and darkness and night around the story.
But you didn't, so really it would have been so much better to use a metaphor for what you've been using this whole time. Pain and loss and fear... and then hope and inevitable sarcrifice.
I know its beyond over used, but oh god these feels. These feels are too much.
This a fucked up story but really good
why does Spike now go to the dragon lands? That seems really odd, I would think they would want this whole thing with Rarity solved first.
So if Silver Spoon gets taken to a hospital she's going to be identified and her rich family will want answers. Even if she refuses to say anything there will be an investigation and if they have DNA testing she can identify a good portion of the circle without saying a word.
Why not gift her to Fancypants as a peace offering for him to torture or glorify as he sees fit?