Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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and let it begin!
The ultimate cliffhanger, right there.
CLIFFHANGERS ARGHHHH
I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
Well. Um.
That was. A thing. That, uh. Happened.
I'm not sure what I expected to happen here, with those two sitting down and talking. I knew Sweetie Belle was still harboring defiance and hope, but she turned it up to 11 here. And as soon as she did... Well, in all that I've read, I've never seen it made more crystal clear that between her, Silver Spoon and Fancy Pants, things were Not Going To End Well. The escalation to that point was just perfectly executed, and through it all it had that steadily mounting dread that has been a virtual touchstone of this series to date.
I'm not sure if it was the sheer force with which Fancy snapped, or the way everypony stopped and watched, even going so far as to talk with the foals they'd brought along, that drove it home, but the tension in the Gallery was palpable.
Good show. And perfect cliffhanger. Dear Luna it's going to be a long week waiting for more.
My first thought was literally EQUESTRIA FUCK YEAH
Well this chapter kind of explains why Celestia is so reluctant to intervene.
Spoiler
with Blueblood being a member I could be scandalous if word reached the populace. Not to mention the riots that could follow because of a member of the royal family being with the Circle. The ponies would lose their trust in the royal family. And that would mean protests, if not violence against anyone being a part of them or being in direct contact with them (including Celestia's beloved Twilight)
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F*** Yeah Sweetie Belle
Good story, but now I have to wait ANOTHER week for an update
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Fuuuuuuck! I can't wait until next week! Silver thinks Rarity is upset but she saved her from having to stop Fancy herself and really losing all that she has worked for.
Yay! A new chapter!
Next chapter.........is death. True suffering will happen to this circle. Not tomorrow, not later, it will happen tonight. And no sinner will escape.
FUCK YEAH! Finally a proper conflict! I was afraid for a little that this story will be nothing but "Rarity rapes filly; Rarity degrades another filly; and brakes another" which was kinda repetitive. There was no one to oppose Rarity in first chapters and it made story dull.
I'm also somewhat surprised that Celestia has no one reliable to perform dirty work. Like making sure that some rich stallion accidentally disappears while all his property accidentally catches on fire
And Silver still remembers Diamond.
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Good for you! Some of Twist's issues about wanting to be normal actually come from personal experience. I eventually reached the same conclusion you did, but it took a long time. And I never had to deal with the sort of stuff she's going through.
Do you mean in this story or in fan works in general?
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I actually agree with this, to a point. The early chapters (basically all the stuff before Silver goes on her errand in town) definitely suffered from a bit of an identity crisis as I tried to figure out if I wanted this to be "just" a clopfic or something with a real story to it. I don't think they were free of conflict, but I agree that they could have used more variety. I'm trying to keep that in mind for all my future work.
Honestly, half the reason I'm writing fanfiction at all is to give myself the opportunity to make mistakes like this, learn from them, and improve my skills. So thanks for your feedback!
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Judging from all these comments, a lot of people liked what Sweetie did there. That makes me happy; I rewrote that sequence more times than I've ever rewritten anything. I'm glad it turned out okay, because goddammit, after all the stuff she's had to endure, Sweetie deserved a fitting moment of triumph, fleeting though it was.
Wooooooah.
That, good sir, that was awesome.
to answer hamgray's question, i meant pipsqueake being sodomized everytime i see him in a clop, except once.so yeah, he does have the tendency to have things caught in his ass all the time. also i can't wait for the next chapter. when will it be out again?
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Yeah, I guess Pip does tend to get sodomized a lot. I think it's because, in his one canon appearance, he's dressed as a pirate, which is something tough and manly, but he actually comes off as a bit girly. So a lot of people who like Pip seem to enjoy playing that up, and in clop, that means making him be "the girl" in a sexual context. I think that aspect of his personality is what Rarity (and Hoity) find attractive about him.
Also, he coined the phrase "scary butt fun," so really, he brought it upon himself.
New chapters are posted every Monday, usually at midnight Central Standard Time (or as close as I can manage.)
NO! THE CIRCLE MUST BE BROKEN!
I wonder who they will choose.
>You've got way more money
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>practically destitute compared to my
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>But it'll only be an act
Double space
>yell at Fancy, and not only will it be
Triple space
>Pirates. Pip loved pirates.
Yar har fiddle dee dee~
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