Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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After all this, I think I feel the worst for Sweetie Bell. I feel shitty about all of the characters, but she's... I dunno.
Is it just me or do these emotions match the story perfectly?
So much exploring their thought processes in this chapter, dig it.
Indeed........................:mustache;
Very complicated, yet simple-pfft! i cant type that with a strait face! this is by far one of the most interesting and twisted stories ever! keep it up or mustache Spike will find you!
Poor Twist, things are not going to end well for her. or maybe out of left field, she enjoys it like spoon.
I know I should feel sorry for Sweetie Belle, but I can't. she is just as guilty as Rarity is now, having activley brought in another foal knowing full well what would happen. She is in too deep to get out now .
This is a dark and twisted series, but works very well, I think mostly due to the extreme amount of character driven plot (in both senses). Subject matter aside, all the characters have depth, and that is what is drawing people in.
Good story, good exploration of each characters motivations and thoughts. Looking forward to the next chapter.
1090649 well at least that alternative would be better than her getting raped oooohhh wait... Btw If you want proof about princess molestia here is the link http://askprincessmolestia.tumblr.com/post/11014720890/ask-princess-molestia-025 and I was talking about PHYSICAL and SEXUAL traits not her personality. Ya if I were to get to know her I'm sure I would like her but the proof is in the pudding.1091656
well.... what can I say?
guess "I'm sick" too
MOAR
..... Please?
i dont know how but you have turned a simple fic about foal abuse and rape into an emotional story...
well dam...
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Keep in mind, it's Rarity who's making that judgement about Pinkie in that particular line. We're glimpsing into her thoughts (if that wasn't clear, then my apologies) and seeing her opinion of Pinkie. It's just Rarity being an asshole again, basically. But it's pretty sad since Pinkie is the only one of the Mane 6 who still loves Rarity in this universe.
Personally, I love Pinkie a lot. I had so much fun writing her in Many Loves, she may have graduated to my favorite of the Mane 6.
I'm starting to lose hope that this will ever update
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Check back tomorrow. I've had limited internet access all week because I've been moving to a new city. There will be an update sometime tomorrow, Pinkie promise.
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Sorry for being impatient
I have many other stories that I have been waiting to update and none of them have. I assumed something was wrong. Sorry you ha to deal with it
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But seriously, I like the direction this story is going. I had my doubts about Sweetie's blind optimism towards her sister, but you've managed to pull it off well. As is often the case with abusive relationships, the victim thinks that if they work hard enough, they can change the heart of their abuser.
Have a favorite from me. You've earned it, my friend, you've earned it.
seeing sweetie's love for her sister kinda reminds me of a time when i used to care for my siblings like that. but as the years went by and what not, i find myself caring less and less. the world sure seems different when you're a child.
I threw up.
>I mean, Sweetie and me couldn't be more different
*Sweetie and I
>She's probably got all sorts of fun things
>has got
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>oh, hey, there's scones!
Does "there is scones" sound right to you?
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1458292 I came
I love the first person perspective they are each given in this. Great writing!
when reading this out loud it was quite fun to go from an excited inner monologue of Twist to the depressed thoughts of Sweetie Belle. Quite a contrast I could convey in my tone.
Yeah, I bet he'll be...
You're so right...
This kind of made me cry the love that sweetie gives her sister and the love that rarity does not return is saddening but so far good story
Really Twist? Just, really?
My reaction:
Oh my goodneth! Still horribly adorable.
It kind of shocked me when Twist knew about sex, but at the same time, it seemed reasonable.
An ugly, nerdy girl, who get's turned on by vampires.
Hopefully Miss Rarity puts that into play at some time or another
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Your that one person who wrote that one hot Fluttershy fanfic. :3 hey!
The punctuation following "ask" is missing
That is all. Equestria is ours.
Me when I read this.
5747630 You can only comment like that because your an omniscient observer, you're seeing Rarity from her past, how her victims see her. Twist only has seen Rarity's 'public' mask. She's never encountered Rarity in her private moments away from the public eye, Nor has anyone told her about the real Rarity. And even if they did tell her, why would she believe them when Rarity has prettified her, encouraged her, and all of her encounters with Rarity has been when Rarity has her public mask on? She can't read minds to know of the others experiences with Rarity, or of Rarity's dark thoughts and intentions. You have the larger picture, while Twist can only know what she sees and hears. Even Sweetie Belle's behavior on the train could be dismissed as pre-performance jitters.