Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Well. This has gotten as properly terrifying and dread-laced as I'd imagined.
Keep it up.
Wow, this is just, I lack the words to describe this chapter. dread, tension, horror, I felt Ill after this chapter.
Is Rarity really willing to risk a 1 in 4 chance of sacrificing her sister just to enter this group. (I know the answer is yes)
what does it say about me that the stories I am most waiting for are the ones featuring actions I should find morally repugnant.
Need more
Brilliant! I can't wait for the next chapter. I won't dare hope Sweetie makes it out of that chamber but I have to know which foal it will be! Things are about to get so very real,
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I'm worried what will happen if the one they choose is Sweetie, and Rarity tries to stop them. Will they simply cast her out? Force Rarity to take her place?
I've read all your stuff and I just finally had to comment after reading this one. Not that I have any input besides simply letting you know how much I'm enjoying this Silver Spoon series! You're a fantastic writer and I really look forward to each update. And the funny thing is that I almost always avoid the darker, more twisted stuff, too. Anyway, here's to hoping it's not Sweetie Bell... or Silver Spoon--I'm interested to see how Twist's little report will affect her. (Now I feel bad for indirectly wishing for Twist or Pip to become the lifelong sex slave )
@Lainofthewired, I lol'd. Summed up my exact thoughts after finishing this chapter.
Delicious, depraved, and most certainly worthy of a slow clap. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
Thank god for objectivity.
I wonder who the one is going to be..
I say Twist or Pip
Not Silverspoon because that would kinda ruin the whole "Tarnished silver" Theme. Not sweetie because... I don't know just not her
Good work, keep it up
But please enlighten me: will this have a good ending?
Like all the evil gets his butt kicked and be banished or something like this?
Because I would hate for this to have a bad ending.
Maybe the Circle being destroyed once and for all?
Please make this end half way decent
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Thanks so much for the kind words! Silver has really surprised me with how she's grown, actually. She's really turned into a far more interesting character than I ever expected. I originally had no intention of writing more about Silver Spoon than that first story, but ideas for her just kept pouring out. It still happens now whenever I write a scene with her; she's very demanding for a submissive.
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I think it might be human nature to be drawn to things in fiction that would repulse us in real life. It's like a mental safety valve. I know I sure wouldn't condone 90% of the stuff I write about.
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….the first time I read your comment I thought you had written something beside “clap.”
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The ending (not just to Twisted but to all of Tarnished Silver) has been planned out. I don't want to say anything more.
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Hah! It's the little things that count.
In any event, do continue. One of these days, I'll get off my lazy ass and leave this a review.
shits gettin scary!
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you are a master of dipravity and i love you for it!
So who else wants to kill these people? I hate all of them (except the foals) for what they're doing. But I can't stop reading this! Am I insane?
Your going to fuck me!
>She was sprawled on a bed
Double space
>And I'm scared I might want to let them
This should be italic text to indicate a thought
>Silver spoon paced back and forth
"spoon" should have a capital S.
>and remained hovering about 10 feet above the ground
This should say "ten", not "10". Also, imperial sucks and you should feel bad for using it
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I hope the next chapter includes lots of rape/torture.
Now, this chapter is touching. Especially Cheerilee's words. I've actually started caring what will hapen.
This is getting scary. Plus the fact it's 3:20 am here.
It begins!
Hmm, on one hand I want to visit The Circle with AKM and some grenades, but on the other hand I want to see what happens next (I want to see Pip suffer; he's unlucky to be my least favourite foal...)
The first apostrophe, following the opening quotation marks, opens the quote from Cheerilee in Twist's dialogue, but there is no concluding apostrophe to end the Cheerilee-quote
That is all. Equestria is ours.
wow you got the cult thing down to a T :D
I’m imagining Toph from Avatar the last airbender being brought here. She thinks she’s going to some formal dinner which is why Rarity dressed her up and did her hair so shes bored and hasn’t been paying attention up until now.
Things finally click when she’s brought into the room and calmly says, “I’m not stuck down here with you. You’re stuck down here with me.”