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Arbanis


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“There's nothing obvious about Changelings,” Twilight reminded her. “They're cunning and sneaky.”

“I thought they were multicoloured and nice,” Pinkie said.

The others stopped, staring at her.

“Sorry, wrong season,” Pinkie apologized. “Forget I said it!”

I see what you did there

so, they're stuck in a loop?

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No, each night is different.

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interesting, and strangely feels like inception

Do you have plans for more stories?

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Yes. I'm working on at least one with my co-writer for this story.

I love to see Trixie baby twilight.

Well, that's a very interesting story. It reminds me of "The Conquering of Love" by Littlecolt. But there the world is much darker and crueler. In fact, here you could create a bunch of alternative endings before continuing the story. For example, the main characters were sealed away from the Dream Realm and stuck in their dreams, unable to break out of the prison that Nightmare Moon had created. Only a few brave ponies are trying to understand what is happening and how to stop the main villain, and free everyone from sleep. Although I'm not sure that someone will write, because there is already a sequel. However, thanks for the work, I read without stopping. I hope you write more exciting stories.

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