Dream Cycle - Starlight and Trixie

MDream Cycle - Spike
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Spike's out to save a damsel in distress! But she has her own, crinkly ideas about what he should be doing...
Fetish
Spike
Nightmare Rarity
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Mix-up

Mix-up #1 · Feb 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

awesome stuff as always, keep it up.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Feb 18th, 2019 · · ·

Wasn't expecting this to be the next installment, but you did a fantastic job.

Magnaking

Magnaking #3 · Feb 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This is great!!! I love the psychedelic stuff happening here!

Galaxy of Equestria

Galaxy of Equestria #4 · Feb 19th, 2019 · 2 · ·

love the Trixie in diaper cover art and good story

Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #5 · Feb 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This was most intriguing. I particularly liked how it turned into a big mystery adventure as the caves themselves seemed to play enough tricks on Starlight and Trixie to bewitch them into what we got to see in the end.

I was really into your use of lighting. The flashes of red and blue. The way the mirrors had a different tint than the actual room. The ball pit and its ethereal orbs. It really helped to create quite an atmosphere for all that was going on.

It's interesting to think on how the mind can be hypnotized through motions, colors, and distortions. The 'bouncing' was written well enough to create kind of a 'dizzy' feeling that would also play tricks on the mind.

Nicely done!

Zubric