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Arbanis


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Huzzah!!!! Its finally here!!!!

Wonderful Christmas gift right here. Thanks so much for another one of these. :pinkiehappy:

My favourite in the series so far.

A very nice set of transitions as, at some points, it is difficult to discern when Nightwear is toying with Twily in the waking world, or the dream world.

The situations are very well played through and the dream-thinking of Twilight reminds me of my own dream logic. You think in the dream that something isn't quite right but your dream self still goes with it. Kind of like an auto-pilot.

Well more crazy padded fun. I have to admit I wouldnt mind a dream like that lol

Very deep tale. There were a lot of location switches but, if I gather correctly, some were meant more as distractions as Nightmare / Nightwear was going through the book horse's actual mind and 'updating' it. Each trip into the Twibrary was a time where Twilight had the slightest of chances to regain her power over her antagonist. Unfortunately each manipulated book and discard tome impacted the actual memories. The change to actual memories would more than mess with the ability to think while in the Dreamscape. So, in time, Nightmare / Nightwear was able to properly get Twilight Sparkle where she needed her to be.

Something makes me think on how this could have been one of the 'tests' Nightmare Moon had created on her journey to The Castle Of The Two Sisters. Or, more likely, Nightmare Moon / Nightwear was in a state like King Sombra. She eventually figured out how to adapt to, in the slightest, gain power within the Dream Realm and worked silently and gradually to make the needed updates to stop The Element Of Magic while also keeping out the only pony who could match her in Dream Walking, Luna.

Hello, I have always liked the stories you write, but this was very good, I loved it and I really hope to see what will be the next thing you write.

I liked how she rewrote Twi mind. That was a near touch

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