I... became a dragon?but I was a dragon but I wasn't like any other dragon. I was so musch stronger, more powerful, more magics than any others. Sooner or later, I found that I am in Equestria, but things did not go how I expected. Every single one of them hated me, even my own kind, because of my look. But I will protect pony kind even if it means to die.
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I GOT THE SPOT HA HA HA HA and great story.
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AWESOME.
Also I'm the proofreader
Could you do MOAR please? the story's great!
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I thought everyone hated this story, so I was about to delete it. Thank god that I can continue this story.
1044198 You thought people thought your story sucks?! yes your story isnt the #1 liked and viewed story in all the world but sereously dont be descouraged! the lenght of the chapter is good (people who are lazy wont nessesaraly (i probaby butchered the spelling) be taken aback and people like me who read chapters 10,000 words long will still be satisfied), the dragon is awesome as fuck, i spoted no spelling or grammar mistakes, and overall i like OP as fuck characters. the only thing though is that the character is a bit too big. And over all one of my fav stories!
Keep writing!
soo... whens the new chapter? or are you having writers block or gone away or something. I cant wait for dat new chapter!
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I am working on it, but I am right now in London to see the Olympic.
Asum! i actually live in london but i am currently in kiev.
AWESOME! i found nothing in the way of flaws. i guess in these situations people are meant to say MOAR!
Sooo whens a new chapter coming out?
1147989 MOAR!!!
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I don't know how can I describe secret meeting with Luna. I am working on it, but I there are just too many things that won't match for the entire story line, you see stories gotta have logic
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Let ur imagination flow its easier then you think :)
And try to avoid huge wall of texts they can be a burden for the eye.
You deserve this
keep it up!
MOAR I NEED MOAR
Are you ever going to continue this?
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I have now returned to the land of friendship is magic fiction realm where all the most courageous bronies dwell. Alas! I myself was busy by attending to one of my greatist work such as scratching my ass. And behold my friends as a gift to you all I shall go back to my holy writing desk immeidatly so that you may receive my gift as fast as possible.
I like this story. Keep it up.
Awesome.
Can I get a drawing of Jay' s dragon form?
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Yeah, sure. I can make that in 3D if you like.
At first glance, this looked like a Gary Stu or Mary Sue, but It seems to have evolved from that point
Note that when you use the verb form of breath, instead of breath, it is breathe, breath is pronounced as br-eh-th, while breathe is pronounced bree-ath-e, and I noticed that you missed the e there, for future reference, I would suggest taking heed of this.
Nice story and it is an original too!!!!!!!!!! :) please update!!!
This is awsome. I like the pictures really bad ass. As soon as I get my Deviant Art up I'm faving.
1055071 Then I hope you watch out for the Russians.
More please