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Mind Artist has come to Canterlot with a very odd request. He asks Celestia to take him to the cave of a very old dragon. Some may say that the dragon is quite elder.

Yet this strange pony claims that they are old friends. How is this possible?

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I don't understand... But that was REALLY GOOD!

His Names is Jace "Belaren", only inaccuracy that i could see :pinkiesmile: well done on an MTG crossover :twilight smile: Nicol Bolas should have just blown Jace up where he stood though to be honest, thats what he almost did to Ajani :rainbow laugh:

all in all, like i said, a good cross over, have a moustache :moustache:

I will say this was mostly impacted by a sudden urge to write, and to get down the idea of "Bolas retires to EQ, because it's peaceful." Of course, something as powerful and old as Bolas can't just retire. Someone will come looking for him, so why not another silly strong walker?

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Well thanks! It's always reassuring to know that, even if it doesn't make sense, it was still well written.

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Are you sure? A cursory search revealed it was Beleren. Looks like we were both mistaken.

I was worried about writing Bolas like this, because he has a pretty well established backstory and personality, but I feel like I pulled it off well enough. Although, I was tempted to let him annihilate Jace when the illusion was lifted, but I felt like his time relaxing in EQ might have made him a bit soft (even though this would never happen elsewhere).

3782167 Damn this keypad, I typed beleren but it autocorrected it :rainbowwild: I run a Golgari deck with splash red so I got Garruk Relentless and Xenagos the Reveler in it XD why not do a sequel ? Have them meet ajani along the way, jace stops Nicol from eradicating him and they all join forces xD although maybe if he spent so long in equestria with all its white mana, he might have forgiven him :rainbowwild: go wild, unleash all your wildest ideas and see what happens :3

3782167 all in all, good story, you did good, have many moustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

3782167 when is the next chapter coming out? :twilightsmile:

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I'll just reply to one comment, so that your poor notice bar doesn't explode three times over the same comment.

I wasn't originally planning on adding any chapters when I wrote this, but I got writers bug over it now, so...
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As for a release for the next chapter, I've just entered my week of exams, so the updates will be intermittent at best. The best I can provide is a "Hopefully by the end of the week."

As for what happens... We'll probably stick around in Equestria for a while, and only occasionally drop in on our dynamic duo.

3783997 sowwy for blowing up the comments :twilightblush: I am so looking forward to it :rainbowdetermined2:

3786569 Holy crap, that was scary :applecry: it was awesome!!!!!!!! Keep up the work for your exams, good luck :rainbowkiss:

'Cus Celestia would totally be friends with someone who wiped out the rest of his own species just so he would always be the strongest of his kind. Perhaps she found a kindred spirit.

Neither of them noticed the oil that dripped from Jace's boot.

If that's Nightmare Moon, she'll probably suffer a mental breakdown from her God Complex failing to rationalize itself with the sheer power a planeswalker wields so casually.

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