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ObeySaturnGod


Saturn's my name, writing's my game.

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A year has passed since the terrible accident that claimed Rarity's life and Twilight Sparkle's sanity. Spike and his remaining friends have tried to put the past behind them, but when a revelation about their demented friend comes to light, they have no choice but to confront the corrupted Element of Magic. They hold Equestria's fate, for if they fail to save their friend, Twilight will enact an apocalyptic genocide upon the ponies she used to know and love, dooming them all to a fate far worse than death.

This is a sequel to my story Friends Forever. It is highly suggested you read that one before this one, as it details Twilight's descent into insanity and how the current situation came about.

Cover image by xX-Mr-No-Name-Xx

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 68 )

NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE
NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE
NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE.

This story isn't for me.

I like it

Damn, INSANE TWILIGHT IS INSANE - AND FREAKING AWESOME.

Sad. TRACKED. But a question, HOW DID RARITY DIE?

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Insane Twilight is always within my realm of interest.

congrats you just got me to read the prequel or original just from the desc[img]mlfw1126_my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-im-with-twilight-on-this-one[/img] i wonder if the image will work
nope!:pinkiecrazy:

oh wait i already read it:facehoof:

476156 read the original story or ask me just to send you the credentials (i really hope i used that word right:twilightblush:

476271
You made me laugh. Thanks for making my cold hard shriveled up heart feel warmth for a few seconds.

shit man this is even creepyer then the last one...please continue this, i might not be able to sleep without an ending....or with an ending...
you have cause me to reach an impass.....

after reading both the story and the comments, i have a very strong feeling that this is a sequel. Now i must go find whatever the original is.

Krushnazag is pleased mortal. Continue

:raritycry::raritydespair: THIS IS THE WORST POSSIBLE THING EVAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What? I really mean it this time!

I enjoyed it because it was a good story but I do not enjoy the insanity because it is sad. but i enjoyed it:rainbowdetermined2:

This looks like it's going to be better than ''Friends forever''! I can't wait to see how this ends...:trollestia:

:twilightoops:gross that sounded a bit more painful than painless even if she severed his brain stem which isn't behind drictly behind the eye so in hind sight TWILIGHT LIED!!!

518046

Not like she's the Element of Honesty herre.

I wants MOAR!!!!! Twilight you friggin psychopath.... we loves you so much :twilightsmile:

Damn
Brutal much?

518194
Slightly off topic but relevant to the genre. Has anyone read a fic where Applejack has gone insane? I mean Pinkie has Cupcakes, Rainbow has Factory, I've seen a few fics where Rarity turns ponies into clothes, Twilight has this along with a few others, and Fluttershy had FlUtTeR. Poor AJ, gets no blood for her...

519051

Applejack gets all the incest, leave her alone.

518244

That particular incident will be the worst this story has to offer, in terms of gore.

OK this was a nice second chapter despite the strangeness that is not really strange anymore with pony's becoming a more adult thing with the added gore but in conclusion nice chapter:rainbowdetermined2:

Damn, Twilight is fuck up. Lets hope the others can snap her out of it.

This is awesome, I'm so stoked for when you continue this.
I have one grammatical error I'd like to point out, though. From the second paragraph.
"Blood poured from ever orifice"

:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:
that is what twilight is doing right now that rarity is perma screwed and im like
:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

" It struck her shield, the golden magic fluctuating but holding steady"
wait, what? It held steady, but it fluctuated... you mean it fluctuated but held right? If it held steady then it couldn't have fluctuated.... or am I forgetting an alternate definition of holding steady where it's the equivalent of holding strong? God the english language is so stupid. It may be my first language, but it has too many things meaning too many things.


Oh snap, Twi just lost Rarity and the book. :trollestia: What now Twilight? Your move.
:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:......:twilightsmile:
oh god :fluttershyouch:

Why do i love this ?
How come i love this Twilight... she is sick and mad... but badass.

Anyways, great job writing this !

I need to read MORE. I must know what happens after this! :raritydespair:

642192

Holy hell, that is amazing! That picture is the first fan artwork of any of my stories, and what a picture it is! Seriously, awesome job!

argh cliffhanger
YOU MY GOOD SIR/MADAM ARE A SON OF A BLUEBERRY MUFFIN!!!


FOR THE BANANA-NUT CRUSADE!!!

oh jeezm cliffhangers,
MOAR PLEASE :pinkiehappy::

Great as always! I eagerly await the next installment :pinkiecrazy:

TWILIGHT!!!!! WHAT THE HELLZ? YOU JUST TOLD YOURSELF YOU WERE WRONG YET YOU CONTINUE!!!!! LAST TIME YOU TALKED TO YOURSELF YOU SPENT A WEEK OBSESSING OVER IT!!!!

GOD!!!! you friggin noodle!!!!!

eeyup that bitch is batshit crazy...
great writing sir/ma'am i can almost feel the insanity emitting from Twilight, and the concern the others feel. that shiz is Deliciously sculpted with words.
i hope one day i will write as well as you. until then....any pointers?

735452

Ponychan's /fic/ board is full of reviewers and writers that can help you improve your writing. I'm not really the best person to be looking at for writing tips, since I still let mistakes here and there get through.

Dang it, I told myself I wasn't gonna tear up, but I'm borderline crying right now. :pinkiesad2: At first I was afraid this would just be constant killing and no emotion(other than sorrow-filled rage), but now I'm glad I read this. It was beautifully written and wonderfully emotional.

well shit twilight.
I BLAME THE OTHERS
if they were faster they would have convinced twilight before she cast the spell but nooo
KILL THE OTHERS:flutterrage:
well whoes the others:facehoof:
everyone but me:yay:
*fine casts shield on fluttershy*:twilightangry2:
*casts Armageddon*:twilightangry2:
IT IS SUPPER EFFECTIVE:twilightblush:
*shield fails*:fluttercry:
woops sorry fluttershy bye!:twilightoops:

*nopenopenope*
screw manly tears...im close to crying like a foal.
this was one of the most beautifully written things ive ever had the pleasure of reading
and ...no no "and"s...thats it imma end with that
:raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry:

Its storys like this that make me feel like a heartless bitch.
Why? Because I don't cry...it was sad yet I don't cry...

awwwww so much sadness... but I'm still so happy I found this fic :twilightsmile:

Dead Island theme and this.

Just fuck.

Before I read this, I was like 'I'm going to read this.' After I read this, I was like 'Damn.'

Very sad. Didn't cry though, but the heartless personality in me doesn't cry often, but you did get my feels though, so good job.

I read this the other day and cried so much in places, I almost had to stop reading til my vision cleared. That said, I kinda wish it'd been longer. Very well done.

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