Awesome!

And kudos for showing the PER as what are essentially religious terrorists instead of "heroes".

i have a feeling the misanthropist wouldnt like this story you jelly misanthropist

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At least five of those thumbs down are from misanthropists I bet.

The others are people who didn't like it and forgot to leave critique so I can improve. I fucking hate it when they don't tell me why they think it's bad.

1138184 personally i cant find anything wrong with your story infact i would go as far as to say it is one of the best tcb stories iv read so far because of the fact that all the ponies are not slaves to celestas will and grammar wise well i suck at anything that's not spelling so ya but i give it ten out of 6 mustaches
and also because of the fact that not all humans are assholes that gives you one more mustache

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Big Damn Heroes!

I really like the conversion bureau universe and you're story is really original or at least I haven't read any similiar stories. Please provide us with more chapters.

Gosh i sound so cheesy. Thanks for the chapter.

Keep this coming please

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I'll get on this and Parallel again soon, I've been super busy lately.

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Damn, didn't know it was THAT good, lol

This story is AMAZING!

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I would be lying if I said I wasn't writing for selfish reasons. Conversion Bureau stories and the people that write them piss me off. Their "Liberal Politics" level of hypocrisy is utterly baffling to me.

I decided to write something that felt a bit more human.

An update would be nice, comrade....
What's the trouble?

Is this dead? Please don't let it be

this is dead ain't it