Cool start, however, you said Trillion people moving in. Is that an exaggeration or does the story have a trillion humans? If so, this isn't very realistic. Just putting it out there.

Tracking, this seems interesting. The idea of Twilight working against the Princess is mind-blowing.

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Good catch. Meant to write billion. Thanks.

That's a fresh idea, and a good start IMO. Faved/Tracking. Wish you luck!

You have my attention. And a favorite (fav?).

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

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He's a bit more unstable than William. Which is ironic because Will is the one with PTSD.

Well....this is a new take on some things. Tracking.

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More than likely tonight, I'm also working on Parallel and obsessively playing Batman after getting back from seeing The Dark Knight Rises.

Paused halfway through the chapter.

What's this I hear?

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Bureaus getting destroyed? Meh, HLF

Terrorist attacks on ponies? Meh, human supremists whom I'd likely side with if they weren't so Ork-ish with their ideals.

Twilight being seen 3 days before the attack? Great, now we have a possible sub plot going on about the Princess' damned pet like all the other stories I've read about humanity's last stand in this verse.

Twilight used to be a beloved- WHOA WAIT A SECOND!!!

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Used to be beloved... Seen three days before... Terrorist attack... That means that she's...*GASP*

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You have my mother fucking undivided attention.

*Finishes Chapter*

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Get off the internet.

Cancel or cut off any sort of online access to your information.

For I will hack it.

I will find where you live.

I will come tie you up and hold gun to your head to get you writing more chapters for this and only this.

In other words?

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Chapter 1:
Oh...
Wow...
I'm adding this to read later.

So.... What gave you the idea to write this story?
And more over, how did you manage to push through with the following chapters?

....A Twilight that's fight FOR Humanity in a TCB instead against them?

You just earned yourself a reader.

In the HLF? The terrorist Anti-Pony group? Nope not for me.

Twilight gave a sad smile, "Then I'd say 'Welcome to the Human Liberation Front.'"

What!!!? You want to mass murder your kind!!?
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