Lunas little troubles.

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PonyholicsAnonymous

PonyholicsAnonymous #1 · Jul 17th, 2012 · 1 · · Finding out..the hard way. ·

I think you've got some potential as a writer, but there are definitely some issues you have to work through first. Right now, I'd advise you work on your grammar. I don't know what you write in, but if it has a spellcheck, you should definitely pay attention to it. Every time you see a mistake, go back and fix it. That's the only way you'll learn to stop making them. The second best thing you can do to improve your writing after practicing is to read as much as you can. And not just pony fics, either. Go out and read some real books by published authors. It'll help you figure out how to make your writing flow better. Once you've improved your writing generally, then you can worry about how to write good clop.

Razvan563

Razvan563 #2 · Jul 17th, 2012 · · · Finding out..the hard way. ·

You need to work on some grammar issues and also the fact that after every punctiuation sign you need to leave space if you don't want to do that by yourself use Microsoft word it can resolve this kind of mistakes.

ru771an

ru771an #3 · Jul 17th, 2012 · · · Finding out..the hard way. ·

well sorry guys,I dont have any form of spell check and Im the only one in my family who can speak english.
Im doing my best,bear with me while I try to learn more. I have figured out how to use BOLD and ITALICS. I do also have a fanfiction profile with 23+stories but this is just a whole new thing.