Flying my last flight in the MI-24 before I am transferred to a different machine out in Russia, I am ordered to look at a unidentified crashed object and investigate., last thing I ever expected was a human claiming to be a pony appear in my life. Just another day...I think.
Anyway my names Vladimir, and I am not a brony neither do I have any idea what "My little pony " is and why there is a naked girl that's going to turn my life upside down...I have no idea, don't ask.
Russians are badass.
Therefore, Vladimir is a badass.
I like... not sure if want follow
The only complaint I have is grammar. Fix that up and you, sir, might have a new follower!
Decent story, grammar could be fixed but I love it.
2447295>>2447119
Bad grammer for a reason, this is how quite a few of my country men speak, just for effect
2449905
It's not the dialogue, it's the text besides. Just a few missed apostrophes and spelling errors.
2451978
I am sorry that I cant garuntee a complete 100% spell check free fic, I have someone that is going to take a look at it and find any errors soon, but I a apologise for any misread/standards that people have, most of my english is internet learnt so thats where I guess that the spelling errors come from.
I will make this fic error free!!
2452220
That's the spirit! Keep on writing!
This is a fantastic story, but you have too many 'amazingly descriptive' words in the dialogue. Tone it down to something more every-day like.
I wonder if one of the russians will call Spitfire a cyka (bitch) in her face with him around
2558852
Such a match made in heaven: arnt they?
2560823 yep
Good story. It has a "sex" tag, but no sex. You should fix that by taking off the tag.
2951842
Sex later on.
2952249 Yeah... I only just noticed the IN in Incomplete! My ADHD brain does that sometimes! When are you going to update the Spitfire/Soaryn fic on FanFiction.net? I'm Pernese-at-Heart there.
2952760
When I get on my laptop and be able ti write story insteac od reokyibg in helicopter
Moar ..... Please good sir
Next chapter should be coming soon.
Please work on the Maus story first.
No more updates?
3955238
Liar!