inspired by "my little Dashie" and my friends crazy life, tank driver "Nexus" gets his tank destroyed by a bunch of recruits hes trying to train, after going to hospital. He then returns to find a foal in the gun barrel. We know her as Rarity, to him she is "Pushka pony". *Cannon pony.*.
At first he wents to dump her, then keep her as a pet. Time grows on and they become a kind of family. However Nexus"s life takes a turn for worst....
my attempt at conquering the world...with the help of spell check!
Finished.
Chapters (9)
Immediately I thought of Russian Dancing Pony.
Also, you need a goddamn editor.
cool story bro!
You got me with the tanks, but im little wary from a my little dashie inspired... so imma get my opinion to myself
I agree with Tio, you should have a proofreader look over your things. but all in all im liking where this is going!
thanks guys!
its inspired by "my little Dashies" in a way that the self narrator finds one of the MLP characters, this also starts before the show ever came out.
And "Nexus" is a real tank driver, i will be updating next week hopefully.
dude. usually i wouldnt really like this kind of story. but the tanks hook me and now i cant wait for the chapters. keep it up. im liking what you have going on.
good going
Hey, good job. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Have a dragon with a stache.
NEED MOAR
Is it strange i read this entire thing with a russian accent?
heh dont worry guys,its better to read with Russian accent,it will be updated as soon as I get back to Russia,watching the olympics at the moment!
ah! i cannot read without the accent!!
Very much like this concept.
Only wish chapters were longer. It's brilliant!
ill give you guys a hint,this is a action styled fic near the end...it begins with parachutes and tanks......
sounds interesting
go on... i'm intrigued.
and now I shall get writing on the biggest chapter Ive ever done, and the most explosive one...with TANKS!!!!!!!!!!!
is someone getting bored of combat?
getting bored? russiancupcake! we have not even got there yet!
1 battalion of russians vs 20 division of chinese
russians are winning
that means russians beats chinese
COOOOOOOOOOL
finally an update
and were the hell is Pushka?!
next chapters going to be rated G for GORE.
You know I actually like this story.....Huh....damn
I am now going to try and get the guy who this is based on to do a reading of it on youtube.
thanks for reading, although I want this to be in the popular stories (and it failed) Im happy with the way things turned out.
MAJOR PLOT TWIST!
oh wow
I love how you've managed to give this a very Russian with broken English feel, yet not make it hard to read at the same time.
cause you is smart
Here, have a
you know, I kinda preferred this to my little dashie.
Just, find a guy to do some editing, and this will be freaking perfect
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well its finished now, "Nexus" is just the driving name for a friend of mine. Since hes a half brony, tank driver and a huge Rarity fan i thought I would write this, it only has 200more words than My little Dashes and the ending is slighty better, well kind of.
Half Brony?
ALL or NOTHING
I don't understand why you have most chapters left aligned, and some chapters center aligned. For the sake of consistency choose one (left aligned is highly recommended.)
Beautiful. simply amazing. I can't say what an awsome story this is. I salute you and wish you luck in you're future story's.
1115105 Hello ru771an, I have an Idea of a story based on the concept of ponys somehow turning up in the human world and then figuring out what happened when they return to Equestria (I can give you more details if you want). And I wonder if it would be ok for me to reference, include or base Raritys experiences in the human world on this story.
I doubt I will finish my story. But if it ever get finished you will get credit for the inspiration.
Btw great story, as if it wasn't obvious.
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its fine, as long as you give me some credit then im happy!.
more detail?, YES!
1389435 Alright more detail, keep in mind I got the idea a few days ago so it's very rough.
It starts as when Rainbow returns to Equestria after the events of My Little Dashie. Rainbow disappeared after an accident with Twilights magic (it says so in MLD), so nopony is worried, they know what happened. Then somepony else disappears, I'm thinking Rarity since she is a unicorn and the disappearance can be blamed on one of her spells going wrong.
I think I might encourage the readers to read the story I base the characters experience on. Then a quick recap of what they experienced, both to not force the readers to read another story, and to add to the original story with foreshadowing and other stuff.
It's when the third of the mane 6 disappears the realize that something else is going on. They start to try and figure out what is going on but to little success. They can't figure it out even after all of them have been transported into the human world and been safely returned thanks to Celestia. But they are certain that someone or something is doing it to them.
The final pony to be transported into the human world will be Lyra, she is obsessed with humans and volunteers to be sent into the human world the same way RD were. She is given a spell so she can remember why she is on Earth (or she have dreams of ponyville, just like she have dreams of Earth in Anthropology by JasonTheHuman). She discovers something that helps the mane 6 and the princesses to stop whatever is causing the disappearances.
I have still not figured out who or what causes the incidents, but right now I'm going with human experiments with black holes, teleporation, faster than light travel or something along those lines. I might even throw in the doctor and make him turn into doctor hooves as he ends up at the wrong side.
Well that is how far I have come, what do you think?
And thanks for allowing me to use your story.
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what do i think?
I AM GOING TO READ IT
1391418 I'm glad you like it. Well I say glad but I don't think I really have processed that someone actually liked my idea, to me it seemed like a predictable story and nothing to get exited about. I guess I'm just doubting myself, I do that sometimes.
Also you seem very exited, the only thing missing was !!!11!!1!!... The story was planned to be something that didn't matter to anyone but me, so suddenly there is a lot more pressure on me than planned. But that might end up being a good thing since my stories tend remain unfinished or as ideas.
And I want to point out that it will probably take a long time to finish, even this comment have taken me way to long to write (probably more than 30 minutes..). But that might be because of my surprise when you liked it and the fact that I am very very tired right now.
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well good luck, i usually try for about 500 words per day, sometimes a weekupload is best, at the end it should be around 1900-2500 words per chapter
LOL You guys are funny! I know the guy's wife; this is a beautiful metaphor that almost has me crying already.
Ru771an, this is a good story. I heard of this because of Nexus' wife(lovely woman); I haven't been disappointed. Good on you. Also, I hear you're a "very nice guy"... ever happen to visit Canada?
I read this story over again.....Manly tears where shed my friends.
This is cute! AND IT HAS TANKS!!!
I AM STRONK RUSSIAN MAN, TINY PONY AMUSES ME.